Are my lyrics any good?!
Question: Are my lyrics any good!?
I posted these lyrics earlier, but I've made some changes!. Please tell me what you honestly think, don't sugar coat anything please!. thanks!. Any suggestions will be much appreciated!.
[verse 1]
Are we growing up!?
Or just going out!?
Are we making up!?
Or just making out!?
Are we gona last!?
Or just be a fling!?
Are you really gonna see me!?
[verse 2]
I know that I can't let you go
I still wish you would see me as only me
You only ever try to change me
You won't let me be who I really am
[chorus]
Because i know I can be something more
I can be me
[verse 3]
The last time I messed up, you freaked out
I had no doubt
That wer weren't meant to be
[chorus]
Because I know I can be something more
i can be me
[verse 4]
There's no more pain
because you're not worth all I feel
Now you have to move on
Because I've already been there
I know I can be more, I can be me
I am meWww@Enter-QA@Com
[verse 1]
Are we growing up!?
Or just going out!?
Are we making up!?
Or just making out!?
Are we gona last!?
Or just be a fling!?
Are you really gonna see me!?
[verse 2]
I know that I can't let you go
I still wish you would see me as only me
You only ever try to change me
You won't let me be who I really am
[chorus]
Because i know I can be something more
I can be me
[verse 3]
The last time I messed up, you freaked out
I had no doubt
That wer weren't meant to be
[chorus]
Because I know I can be something more
i can be me
[verse 4]
There's no more pain
because you're not worth all I feel
Now you have to move on
Because I've already been there
I know I can be more, I can be me
I am meWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
You've got something! I would time it out and see how long it is with the music!. Most songs should be between 3 and 5 minutes long!.
In most songs the verses are 8 lines and the chorus is between 4 and 10 lines!. However, if you have the timing right, anything goes!!
Well written! And Good Luck!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
In most songs the verses are 8 lines and the chorus is between 4 and 10 lines!. However, if you have the timing right, anything goes!!
Well written! And Good Luck!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
the only problem to me is that the first two lines remind me so much of an FOB song (i think sophmore slump or comeback of the year)!.!.!.!.!.!.but it also needs to be longer!. good luck :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
oh em gee i luv it but i think its kinda short make it longer
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Well their okay just make sure that they make a little more sence!?!Www@Enter-QA@Com
it's okay!.!.!.but you should add more!.!.!.it seems like it's kinda short and repetativeWww@Enter-QA@Com