Song lyric...let me know please?!
Question: Song lyric!.!.!.let me know please!?
I must assume that this is the end,
Cause we can't pretend,
That we can fall in love again!.
And I guess that your looking at me,
Cause it's easy to see,
Your eyes have had enough of this!.
Pre-Chorus
God knows that I let you down,
I know that I let you down,
But I wont let you go underground!.
Chorus
And I got hurt,
I got scared,
I couldn't face the truth between us,
Cause this call would never end!.
And I got lost,
I got home,
Know that I still like you darling,
I just can't love you again!.
And I've seen the breeze through the tress,
They make me believe
That this is what it feels like!.
So I'll keep my hands by myside,
I will now not hide,
From the truth thats filling lies!.
Pre-Chorus
God Knows I've been here before,
I know I've been here before,
When tears rain and start to pour!.
Chorus
A song I wrote!.!.!.please please let me know what you think and how you interpret it!.
Thanks!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Cause we can't pretend,
That we can fall in love again!.
And I guess that your looking at me,
Cause it's easy to see,
Your eyes have had enough of this!.
Pre-Chorus
God knows that I let you down,
I know that I let you down,
But I wont let you go underground!.
Chorus
And I got hurt,
I got scared,
I couldn't face the truth between us,
Cause this call would never end!.
And I got lost,
I got home,
Know that I still like you darling,
I just can't love you again!.
And I've seen the breeze through the tress,
They make me believe
That this is what it feels like!.
So I'll keep my hands by myside,
I will now not hide,
From the truth thats filling lies!.
Pre-Chorus
God Knows I've been here before,
I know I've been here before,
When tears rain and start to pour!.
Chorus
A song I wrote!.!.!.please please let me know what you think and how you interpret it!.
Thanks!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Nice song!.!. I see it as an ode to a past love!.!.!. you need to make some corrections and a few lines don't seem very well worded!.!.!. here are some corrections!.!.!. take what you like!.!.!.and if not, maybe it will make you think of something different!.!.
I guess this is the end,
Cause we can't just pretend,
That we can fall in love again!.
When I see you looking at me
Your eyes like those of a stranger
I know there's no going back!.!.!.!.
Pre-Chorus
God knows that I let you down,
I know that I let you down,
But I won't let you go underground!.
Until here it seems like you let the other person down!.!.!. after that it is not clear!.!. (3rd and 4th stanzas)!.!.!. Just read the lines a few more times, try and rewrite them!.!.!.
I like the pre-choruses!.!.!.!.
Hope you don't mind these comments!.!.!. I know it is easier to comment than it is to write!.!. but hope it helps you!.!. I think if you get it right, you could have a nice song that you can set to music!. Best of luck!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I guess this is the end,
Cause we can't just pretend,
That we can fall in love again!.
When I see you looking at me
Your eyes like those of a stranger
I know there's no going back!.!.!.!.
Pre-Chorus
God knows that I let you down,
I know that I let you down,
But I won't let you go underground!.
Until here it seems like you let the other person down!.!.!. after that it is not clear!.!. (3rd and 4th stanzas)!.!.!. Just read the lines a few more times, try and rewrite them!.!.!.
I like the pre-choruses!.!.!.!.
Hope you don't mind these comments!.!.!. I know it is easier to comment than it is to write!.!. but hope it helps you!.!. I think if you get it right, you could have a nice song that you can set to music!. Best of luck!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Good I liked it!!!
Good Luck with your song writing and God Bless!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Good Luck with your song writing and God Bless!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
very passionate i love it!Www@Enter-QA@Com
i liked it all =) except for the wind throught the trees part!.!.!.that's kind of cheezy
good workWww@Enter-QA@Com
good workWww@Enter-QA@Com