Rate my rap #2?!
Question: Rate my rap #2!?
make ni99as make game-time decisions
im like a game of chess
call me Bobby Fischer
my craft has been finessed
U more like Sonny Liston think u got recognition
step with Cassius Clay bet u back away
cuz u cant hit what u cant visualize
im comin at u full speed u betta improvise
ask Xzibit i stay in a pimpin ride
somethin foreign, u in buckets put a hurtin on ya pride
i am bonafide so we dont coincide
i get 3 mill deals add 2 more i'll sign
5 mill net worth u implore im lyin
Im Chuck Norris i'll Joe Lewis u guys
check my resume, im past employed i employ ni99as
u wack dudes get pist on like Detroit ni99as
im leiutenant, i'll deploy missiles 2 ur home
think that im fibbin we can bet its like Jerome
im gone, imma take a break 4 now
tha final act, like Rihanna imma take a bowWww@Enter-QA@Com
im like a game of chess
call me Bobby Fischer
my craft has been finessed
U more like Sonny Liston think u got recognition
step with Cassius Clay bet u back away
cuz u cant hit what u cant visualize
im comin at u full speed u betta improvise
ask Xzibit i stay in a pimpin ride
somethin foreign, u in buckets put a hurtin on ya pride
i am bonafide so we dont coincide
i get 3 mill deals add 2 more i'll sign
5 mill net worth u implore im lyin
Im Chuck Norris i'll Joe Lewis u guys
check my resume, im past employed i employ ni99as
u wack dudes get pist on like Detroit ni99as
im leiutenant, i'll deploy missiles 2 ur home
think that im fibbin we can bet its like Jerome
im gone, imma take a break 4 now
tha final act, like Rihanna imma take a bowWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
you make too many references to other people!. be more original!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Your flow ain't cuttin it for me!. The ryhming ain't good, the meaning ain't good, ain't none if it good!. Back to the drawing board son!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Rap is nothing more than §hit materialized onto CD's and Vocals!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
dude about a 5
need more meaning and somtimes i thought the rhymes were desperate and the n word doesnt make raps betterWww@Enter-QA@Com
need more meaning and somtimes i thought the rhymes were desperate and the n word doesnt make raps betterWww@Enter-QA@Com
I am sorry!.
But half of it does not rhyme,
You talk about others too much,
It doesn't make sense!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
But half of it does not rhyme,
You talk about others too much,
It doesn't make sense!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
On the serious note it's pretty creative
and fun!. Lets hear it with some music next time!
Keep it up!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
and fun!. Lets hear it with some music next time!
Keep it up!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
That was pretty good, think of it all by yourself!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
ITS IGHHTWww@Enter-QA@Com
I like it :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
its not really good; but keep practicinWww@Enter-QA@Com
on a scale of 1-10
im giving you 7Www@Enter-QA@Com
im giving you 7Www@Enter-QA@Com
I like it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
HAHAHAH
im sorry but that was soo bad !.!.!
too much ni99asWww@Enter-QA@Com
im sorry but that was soo bad !.!.!
too much ni99asWww@Enter-QA@Com
i hope you were kidding with that
cuz i started laughingWww@Enter-QA@Com
cuz i started laughingWww@Enter-QA@Com