What do you think about my song???!
Question: What do you think about my song!?!?!?
If I could be with you,
I will be more happier!.
I won't be this lonely,
with you I want to be!.
Come with me right away,
don't go away again!.
'cuz I missed you so much,
with you I want to be right now!.
(corus)
Come back to me,
don't be afraid!.
Come back to me,
I know that this is love between us!.
Come back to me,
I beg you please!.
Come back to me,
don't go away again!.
You are the only one a got left,
don't let my heart so lonely,no!.
I want you to be right beside me,
but i can see that it's a no,no,no!.
//(corus)//
come back to me,
ooh,ooh!.
come back to me!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I will be more happier!.
I won't be this lonely,
with you I want to be!.
Come with me right away,
don't go away again!.
'cuz I missed you so much,
with you I want to be right now!.
(corus)
Come back to me,
don't be afraid!.
Come back to me,
I know that this is love between us!.
Come back to me,
I beg you please!.
Come back to me,
don't go away again!.
You are the only one a got left,
don't let my heart so lonely,no!.
I want you to be right beside me,
but i can see that it's a no,no,no!.
//(corus)//
come back to me,
ooh,ooh!.
come back to me!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
It's pretty good!.!.!.!.I wish I could hear the song!. You really want to be telling a story through this, so I hope that you did that with the music!. All I really got from it was that you really missed your ex!.!.!.!.try making it a little less redundant and using a bit more imagery!. I actually really like it; can't wait to hear/see it on youtube!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
the thing with puttin lyrics on here is, no one knows how the melody is except you,
I wish I knew how the come back to me part in the hook went
melody wise, feel me!.
more happier!.
you should change that!.
thats not how you say it!.
other than that from what i can tell its not to bad,
maybe a few adjustments, but then again, I don't know the melody!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I wish I knew how the come back to me part in the hook went
melody wise, feel me!.
more happier!.
you should change that!.
thats not how you say it!.
other than that from what i can tell its not to bad,
maybe a few adjustments, but then again, I don't know the melody!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
wow this is impressive bravo bravo now make a youtube video for fu_ks sake
spelln error
You are the only one a got left,
You are the only one I got left,Www@Enter-QA@Com
spelln error
You are the only one a got left,
You are the only one I got left,Www@Enter-QA@Com
grammar!?Www@Enter-QA@Com