Rate this rap I made on 1- 10 scale?!
Question: Rate this rap I made on 1- 10 scale!?
I look at the world today
And I feel lots of disappointment
Every country is going through torment and cruelty
there is still modern day slavery
so many people going through poverty
as i'm making this rhyme
some people are just lucky enough to find a dime
politicians do nothing but argue
the people who take action are few
so many people die everyday
things aren't okay
epidemic is spreading around
so many lost
yet so few found
world has to get back on track
that's just plain fact!.
i know it's a bit short!. but i'm working on it!. wanted to make a statement out of the mainstream rap these days!. i haven't thought of a title yet!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
And I feel lots of disappointment
Every country is going through torment and cruelty
there is still modern day slavery
so many people going through poverty
as i'm making this rhyme
some people are just lucky enough to find a dime
politicians do nothing but argue
the people who take action are few
so many people die everyday
things aren't okay
epidemic is spreading around
so many lost
yet so few found
world has to get back on track
that's just plain fact!.
i know it's a bit short!. but i'm working on it!. wanted to make a statement out of the mainstream rap these days!. i haven't thought of a title yet!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
dude bout bewtween 5 and 8 dude about a 6!.5 needs better rhyme scenes and stuff like datWww@Enter-QA@Com
Honestly it's great; 9!.
I say that because you tell the truth,
you have your own style, and you have
a complex way of telling it, like a story!.
You know not to make a run-on which
is important in today's industry, because
you want it to be catchy which is what you
did, but man!.!. keep working on it, and make
it a song or just a lil' freestyle you know!?
Well goodluck, and goodjob!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I say that because you tell the truth,
you have your own style, and you have
a complex way of telling it, like a story!.
You know not to make a run-on which
is important in today's industry, because
you want it to be catchy which is what you
did, but man!.!. keep working on it, and make
it a song or just a lil' freestyle you know!?
Well goodluck, and goodjob!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I give it like a 3, I really like the concept, and how you arent trying to be all thug and crap, but your rhymes are really sub par, work on that and it will drastically improveWww@Enter-QA@Com
10 bcuz u r rappin about somthin different every body raps about tha saym thing and if u rap about somthin different u will stand out as a rapperWww@Enter-QA@Com
I like the way it wasn't about guns, violence and sex like other raps are usually about!. I give it a 9!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
that **** was wack i give it a 1 (so many people die everyday, things arent okay)Www@Enter-QA@Com
8 its really good that u talk about real stuff!.!.!.!. Most rappers don't talk about anything so Good Job!Www@Enter-QA@Com
8Www@Enter-QA@Com
6Www@Enter-QA@Com
9!.5 GOOD JOBWww@Enter-QA@Com
Kind wack ill give it a 4Www@Enter-QA@Com
hmm!.!.!.!.7Www@Enter-QA@Com
i like the topic, rhymes are solid!.!.!. i'll give you a strong 6Www@Enter-QA@Com
you suck !.000000001Www@Enter-QA@Com
decent 8Www@Enter-QA@Com
9!.!.!.man thats pretty dam* goodWww@Enter-QA@Com