Im making a song and i need some more good lyrics.?!
Question: Im making a song and i need some more good lyrics!.!?
okay heres what i;ve got so far, it might got be good!.
I'm just a small town girllllllll-------, in a small town worlddddd---, Used to think that everything was alright, used to think that everything was uptight!.
I'm a girl so dont go hardcore on me!.
So any good ideas!?
express your opinion about my lyrics so far!.
thanks!Www@Enter-QA@Com
I'm just a small town girllllllll-------, in a small town worlddddd---, Used to think that everything was alright, used to think that everything was uptight!.
I'm a girl so dont go hardcore on me!.
So any good ideas!?
express your opinion about my lyrics so far!.
thanks!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
OK, I'm gonna keep it nice!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. seems like people are having trouble above me with that!.
First!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. You should never ask someone to give you lyrics to a song that YOUR writing!. This would take away the purpose and meaning of it and when you have the finished product you wouldn't feel as proud!. It wouldn't be you writing the song!.
Second!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. You seem to be having some trouble finding the right words because you don't have enough passion or feeling behing what you writing!. You haven't had true inspiration!. Don't write a song because it something you want to do at the moment and your bored!. A song needs to have a purpose!. Such as a release of emotion that you can't express through normal speach or emotion!. You should wait for a moment in your life that has some real significance, and it makes you stop and say I could write a song about this!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. at that very moment you will be spewing words perfectly for the song and you need to write them down immeadiately!. Your problem of finding the right words will disappear!. I carry a pen and paper close by almost everywhere I go!.
Third!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. Honestly I think you should throw away what you have right now and wait until the moment is right and start over!. It sounds way too copied and mainstream!. Some of those lyrics are from a JOURNEY song!. "I took the midnight train going anywhere"
Fourth!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. I'm not sure what kind of musical background you have but, you should decide what genre of music you want your song to be and listen to many songs of the same genre to get a feel of how the breaks, chorus, and riffs meet each other depending on what instrument you plan using as your main influence such as piano or acoustic guitar which are the most common!. This will help give your song structure and a beginning, middle and end!. But, Do NOT copy another song, because once again the song wouldn't be yours!. You should never try to sound like anyone else!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. Because first of all "IT WON'T SELL"!. No label wants a copy cat!. Originality is key!.
Fifth!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. read lots of poetry!. this is a great way to learn how to express yourself through the perfect words!. Don't read just one poet, read as many as you can!. Trust me this will be BIG help!.
I could go on forever!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.good luck, If I can help you anymore message me!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
First!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. You should never ask someone to give you lyrics to a song that YOUR writing!. This would take away the purpose and meaning of it and when you have the finished product you wouldn't feel as proud!. It wouldn't be you writing the song!.
Second!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. You seem to be having some trouble finding the right words because you don't have enough passion or feeling behing what you writing!. You haven't had true inspiration!. Don't write a song because it something you want to do at the moment and your bored!. A song needs to have a purpose!. Such as a release of emotion that you can't express through normal speach or emotion!. You should wait for a moment in your life that has some real significance, and it makes you stop and say I could write a song about this!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. at that very moment you will be spewing words perfectly for the song and you need to write them down immeadiately!. Your problem of finding the right words will disappear!. I carry a pen and paper close by almost everywhere I go!.
Third!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. Honestly I think you should throw away what you have right now and wait until the moment is right and start over!. It sounds way too copied and mainstream!. Some of those lyrics are from a JOURNEY song!. "I took the midnight train going anywhere"
Fourth!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. I'm not sure what kind of musical background you have but, you should decide what genre of music you want your song to be and listen to many songs of the same genre to get a feel of how the breaks, chorus, and riffs meet each other depending on what instrument you plan using as your main influence such as piano or acoustic guitar which are the most common!. This will help give your song structure and a beginning, middle and end!. But, Do NOT copy another song, because once again the song wouldn't be yours!. You should never try to sound like anyone else!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. Because first of all "IT WON'T SELL"!. No label wants a copy cat!. Originality is key!.
Fifth!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. read lots of poetry!. this is a great way to learn how to express yourself through the perfect words!. Don't read just one poet, read as many as you can!. Trust me this will be BIG help!.
I could go on forever!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.good luck, If I can help you anymore message me!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
um it sounds sort of familiar!.!.sorry :[ i dont know what else you could use, im really trying to think!. ummmmm how about
just a small town girl
who thinks everything's goin alright
then realizin that this big old world
isnt what i used to think it was
gettin out of this place
it might do me some good
learnin that i can make it on my own
yet still knowing that i can call a place home
ummmm well thats really all i could think of i wasnt sure exactly where you wanted you wanted to go with the song but what you had sorta sounded familiar!. o and i changed it up a little bit, it doesnt rhyme but for it can be good without rhyming!. its deeper if you dont rhyme all the time!. and if you do make sure it reallyyyy fits with what youre trying to say and if it doesnt, pitch it!. haha but good luck small town girl :]Www@Enter-QA@Com
just a small town girl
who thinks everything's goin alright
then realizin that this big old world
isnt what i used to think it was
gettin out of this place
it might do me some good
learnin that i can make it on my own
yet still knowing that i can call a place home
ummmm well thats really all i could think of i wasnt sure exactly where you wanted you wanted to go with the song but what you had sorta sounded familiar!. o and i changed it up a little bit, it doesnt rhyme but for it can be good without rhyming!. its deeper if you dont rhyme all the time!. and if you do make sure it reallyyyy fits with what youre trying to say and if it doesnt, pitch it!. haha but good luck small town girl :]Www@Enter-QA@Com
took the midnight train going anywhereWww@Enter-QA@Com
I can swear i heard the lyrics in another songWww@Enter-QA@Com
its kind of plain!.!.!.and unoriginal!.Www@Enter-QA@Com