Your opinion on my song lyrics please?!
Question: Your opinion on my song lyrics please!?
This is a portion of a song I started about a year ago, I'm just now trying to complete it!. It's about addiction and personal battles!. I've only recently finished the music to it!. Your opinion is appreciated:
It's been a long night
I see the posters reading it's the wrong fight
I think I'm barely breathing
Leave the lights on
And spin my head in circles 'til I break
And in the morning
I really think this feeling could destroy me
I thought it would be easy to be lonely
And spin my head in circles
Spin my head in circles
'Til I breakWww@Enter-QA@Com
It's been a long night
I see the posters reading it's the wrong fight
I think I'm barely breathing
Leave the lights on
And spin my head in circles 'til I break
And in the morning
I really think this feeling could destroy me
I thought it would be easy to be lonely
And spin my head in circles
Spin my head in circles
'Til I breakWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
the lyrics are amazing!. absolutely brilliant!.
i feel like i'v been there with some of that stuff and i can really relate to the lyrics
can't wait for the finished product!
best of luck
:)Www@Enter-QA@Com
i feel like i'v been there with some of that stuff and i can really relate to the lyrics
can't wait for the finished product!
best of luck
:)Www@Enter-QA@Com
I can imagine Green day singing it!.It is a great song!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
This is really good
i would definetly listen to this
ur lyrics r amazing
better than i could ever do
hope this comment helpsWww@Enter-QA@Com
i would definetly listen to this
ur lyrics r amazing
better than i could ever do
hope this comment helpsWww@Enter-QA@Com
Such excellent poetry there!. What kind of music are you planning to have along with it!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
if you hadnt made it into hollywood yet
wats keeping you!!!
your fabWww@Enter-QA@Com
wats keeping you!!!
your fabWww@Enter-QA@Com