Lyrics to my rock song. Please comment. Thanx?!
Question: Lyrics to my rock song!. Please comment!. Thanx!?
She undresses and i see her skin like burning saphires fading slowley in the evening wind,
slow pulse now beating faster like a race car of desire moving forwards to perspire
coz she craves pure and unpure thoughts
these days are numbered so we thought!.
The streets are dead but we're alive between these four walls casting our days aside and i say " i wanna live the life of rock n roll, drugs, sex alchohol and perfect tone"
She said "i dont like rock n roll but the sex will do just fine baby"
Chorus
Blue pill is taking over, controling what i need to see and changing how i feel
Cupid has fallen under these sheets of lust and lunaty,
Blue pill has taken over!.!.!.!.!. my mind
In a daze in a f*ked up maze love and sex a habit for the modern days
she said "I dont like rock n roll but the sex will do just fine, Baby"
Chorus x2
Protect me from this scene a careless human being could deal one lust could deal one love or even cause you pain x4Www@Enter-QA@Com
slow pulse now beating faster like a race car of desire moving forwards to perspire
coz she craves pure and unpure thoughts
these days are numbered so we thought!.
The streets are dead but we're alive between these four walls casting our days aside and i say " i wanna live the life of rock n roll, drugs, sex alchohol and perfect tone"
She said "i dont like rock n roll but the sex will do just fine baby"
Chorus
Blue pill is taking over, controling what i need to see and changing how i feel
Cupid has fallen under these sheets of lust and lunaty,
Blue pill has taken over!.!.!.!.!. my mind
In a daze in a f*ked up maze love and sex a habit for the modern days
she said "I dont like rock n roll but the sex will do just fine, Baby"
Chorus x2
Protect me from this scene a careless human being could deal one lust could deal one love or even cause you pain x4Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
like the last line but the other one you posted on here today was really really good, but you def have a talent for writingWww@Enter-QA@Com
Why do you need folks approval man!? Live and die by your own compass!.
Btw, it reads like a load o tosh!! Cliched claptrap!. But, no doubt someone will like it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Btw, it reads like a load o tosh!! Cliched claptrap!. But, no doubt someone will like it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
that is very good
have you written the music for it or does it fit a song!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
have you written the music for it or does it fit a song!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
not great not very catchy to sing along to and be in your brain
after hearing it
sorry but better to be honest i thinkWww@Enter-QA@Com
after hearing it
sorry but better to be honest i thinkWww@Enter-QA@Com
wicked but would prob be better if i could here lolWww@Enter-QA@Com
i like itWww@Enter-QA@Com
very clever young man =))Www@Enter-QA@Com
well i don't know what the tune is so i dunno!?!?Www@Enter-QA@Com