What you thing about my lyrics? I wrote..?!
Question: What you thing about my lyrics!? I wrote!.!.!?
Tell me if have some errors gramatical,I came from Brazil!.
I don't know if you like me(really)
I don't know if I like you(is truth)
I don't know if i should trust in you
I don't know if i should give my heart to you(uh)
chorus 1
But we can try
Be perfect together
We can open our wings and fly into the sky
And fly
Let's try(one more time)
Uh Uh Uh Uh Uh Uh Uh
Na Na Na Na Na!.!.!.!.Na na!.!.Uh Uh Uh Uh Uh!.Uh
Look inside of my eyes
See the truth inside me now
You can believe me,I really like you
But I Have no sure(of this)
And we can try one more time before the sun go alway
And we can trust in our wings,because the way Is long
We can trust in us
We just need to move along(move along, along)(move along)
(talking)
You said that you hate me
You broke my heart one time
And you walked out of my life
Now you want to apologize
One thing for me is clear
Some things should never be said
I know that you make a mistake
But that's okay
Now I know that I love you,and you love me
To me is clear
You're unique baby
And we can try
Be perfect together
We can open our wings and fly into the sky
And fly
Let's try(one more time)
Uh Uh Uh Uh Uh Uh Uh
Na Na Na Na Na!.!.!.!.Na na!.!.Uh Uh Uh Uh Uh!.Uh
Look inside of my eyes
See the truth inside me now
You can believe me,I really like you
But I Have no sure(of this)
repeat
I'm so insecure
But now I'm sure
That when you have a person by your side
You should never look out but always look insideWww@Enter-QA@Com
I don't know if you like me(really)
I don't know if I like you(is truth)
I don't know if i should trust in you
I don't know if i should give my heart to you(uh)
chorus 1
But we can try
Be perfect together
We can open our wings and fly into the sky
And fly
Let's try(one more time)
Uh Uh Uh Uh Uh Uh Uh
Na Na Na Na Na!.!.!.!.Na na!.!.Uh Uh Uh Uh Uh!.Uh
Look inside of my eyes
See the truth inside me now
You can believe me,I really like you
But I Have no sure(of this)
And we can try one more time before the sun go alway
And we can trust in our wings,because the way Is long
We can trust in us
We just need to move along(move along, along)(move along)
(talking)
You said that you hate me
You broke my heart one time
And you walked out of my life
Now you want to apologize
One thing for me is clear
Some things should never be said
I know that you make a mistake
But that's okay
Now I know that I love you,and you love me
To me is clear
You're unique baby
And we can try
Be perfect together
We can open our wings and fly into the sky
And fly
Let's try(one more time)
Uh Uh Uh Uh Uh Uh Uh
Na Na Na Na Na!.!.!.!.Na na!.!.Uh Uh Uh Uh Uh!.Uh
Look inside of my eyes
See the truth inside me now
You can believe me,I really like you
But I Have no sure(of this)
repeat
I'm so insecure
But now I'm sure
That when you have a person by your side
You should never look out but always look insideWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Fine, but too long, and too many same sentences!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
i think you are veryy creative!.
i used to write songs back in 6th grade, but i quit because all my songs were about the same things!.
some critique!? i would try to compare the tune to another song so people can get a good sound of what it should sound like!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
i used to write songs back in 6th grade, but i quit because all my songs were about the same things!.
some critique!? i would try to compare the tune to another song so people can get a good sound of what it should sound like!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Cut the endless repeats!.!.!.!.It would become a boring and annoying song, the lyrics are powerful and meaning but are buried under repitition!.!.!.Good luck creating music, I love that you are trying to express yourself!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
thats a rele awesome song!!!! u must b VERY talented
im impressed!!!
the song has great meaning and i can rele connect 2 it
GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
im impressed!!!
the song has great meaning and i can rele connect 2 it
GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
I lubb dizzz!.
Great song!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Great song!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
paragraph 5: its the sun goes away
paragraph 6:I know that you made a mistake
hope this helpsWww@Enter-QA@Com
paragraph 6:I know that you made a mistake
hope this helpsWww@Enter-QA@Com