What do u think of my song?!


Question: What do u think of my song!?
i need a name for it so if u have an idea tell me
if not just tell me what you think!.

its christian rock!. i wrote it myself!.




take my worldly ways from me
Cast ayway the demons of my life
slice away the doubt inside my mind
whats true, whats real, whats not, whats fake!?
i count all the paths i could take!.

Chorus
the world is sick and messed up
i know im fed up
Jesus christ take my hand
i want to be reborn again
lead me to a safer place
thank you for your mercy and grace!.


im not going to put down the whole song but what do u think!?
should i continue!? im not really that old!. just 14!.Www@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
Yes I'm a songwriter myself and you should definitely continue doing this if it's what you want!. I could actually imagine that as a rock song!. I'm thinking for ideas for a title but it would help to know the whole song, you can email me it if you like!.

Edit note: in respose to thea252: it's a song not an english paper!. If it's redundant or not grammatically correct if it suits the song then that's the way you should do it!. I personally like it the way it is!.

How 'bout "Reborn Again" it's kinda catchy and it'll make people think!. That could work!. It really all depends on the whole song I think but from what you've shown it could work!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

The message is clear!. Only comment I have is that you use the word "way" too much in the first three lines when you say , "way" and then "away" twice!. also, you're either reborn, or born again!. I wouldn't put "reborn again", it's redundant!. Otherwise, have funWww@Enter-QA@Com

lol thats a really good song
do u play an insturment with it like guitar or piano or somthing!?Www@Enter-QA@Com

I am a song writer looks ok but try not to use the name jesus christ never sounds rightWww@Enter-QA@Com

hackneyed!. sorry!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

It looks good!
I am really not into any Christian music, though, but continue writing songs!. You are good!Www@Enter-QA@Com

The text is really nice, on what music is it sung!?Www@Enter-QA@Com

I am also 14 and i enjoy writting songs
it is vry good,
get goingWww@Enter-QA@Com

its really great sing it wit a slow then high momentumWww@Enter-QA@Com

i'm not into Christian rock, but i liked itWww@Enter-QA@Com

nope!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

it's a big NO NO!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

i THINK
JESUS CHRIST TAKE MY HANDWww@Enter-QA@Com



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