Rate my Rap?!


Question: Rate my Rap!?
Where the party at!? (Airing Dirty Laundry)
As soon as I poured in my Ajax soap
I saw this girl with yellow spandex and a black tee that said dope
She was such a little cutie
With a beautiful face and booty
But when I approached her she responded very rudely
I said that’s okay baby cause I don’t need your cellie
The way your clothes smell is upsetting my belly
Her eyes got watery and it was obvious she was hurt
As I turned to walk away she started to scream and curse
I picked up my pace before sh_t got worse
I sat down to watch to public television
when the sweetheart next to me said “can you tell me the time!? I have bad vision!.”
I told her
All the while thinking about the many ways to fold her
She had very nice breasts
Which were accentuated by the musical note tattooed on her chest
I asked her for her number and she wrote it on my hand
My clothes were done and promised to call her every now and then
Nowadays dudes want girls all for themselves, so they act like they don’t know where the party at
Its all good, cause from now on I snag shorties at the laundry matWww@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
lol i like it!. Beginning made me laugh (n a good way) lolWww@Enter-QA@Com

Your rap song is pretty good!.From beginning to end it made me laugh!. 80% Rhymed and half rhymed!. Tweak a few spots here and there and your good to go!. Scale of 1-10, an 8!.However lets just hope for your sake and ours that was for laughter and not lyrics meant to appear on a demo, mixtape, or upcoming album!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

seen it!.!.!. you posted it on my Q before

lol somones jealous of your lyrical skills


BUT some of the line were quite un-even but its much better that anything i could ever doWww@Enter-QA@Com

thats really good
9!.5 out of 10

plz pick me 4 best answerWww@Enter-QA@Com

Nice 8/10
I like the line "Which were accentuated by the musical note tattooed on her chest"Www@Enter-QA@Com

Dude,don't rap! You suck! It doesn't even rhyme! What are you white!? If you are, your no eminem or Paul Wall,so stop!And if your black,you should be ashamed!Www@Enter-QA@Com

lmao 9/10Www@Enter-QA@Com

LOL that's so sick

9!.333/10Www@Enter-QA@Com

it sucks lol
zay
1/10Www@Enter-QA@Com

i think its pretty gdWww@Enter-QA@Com

lmao - love it!Www@Enter-QA@Com

that was good!. i'd give it 7!.5/10!. tone it down with the sexual lyrics!.Www@Enter-QA@Com



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