Rate my song?! (lyrics)?!
Question: Rate my song!?! (lyrics)!?
rate my lyrics and tell me if i need to improve!
1-10
Everytime I see you with her
I think about we had before
Wishin I was her
so you could see!.!.
You would be so much better with me
I wanna be the one to set you free
But you want her
I feel like Im the one who has been cheated
The one whos been beated
A mark no one can remove
A mark made by your move
I see the way you look at her
What i would give to be her
But instead Im watchin you from behind
Oh, my love I wish you could find
I know this is not long!.!.its an idea but rate this as if it was a song!.!.and please tell the truth! Was the song meaning full!?
Can you relate!? Thanks!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
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Everytime I see you with her
I think about we had before
Wishin I was her
so you could see!.!.
You would be so much better with me
I wanna be the one to set you free
But you want her
I feel like Im the one who has been cheated
The one whos been beated
A mark no one can remove
A mark made by your move
I see the way you look at her
What i would give to be her
But instead Im watchin you from behind
Oh, my love I wish you could find
I know this is not long!.!.its an idea but rate this as if it was a song!.!.and please tell the truth! Was the song meaning full!?
Can you relate!? Thanks!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
i fell in love with those lyrics, they really are amazing
with the right music, it would be a hit!.!.!.
its a very realistic song!.
and by the way!.!.!.i'll give it a 20 lolWww@Enter-QA@Com
with the right music, it would be a hit!.!.!.
its a very realistic song!.
and by the way!.!.!.i'll give it a 20 lolWww@Enter-QA@Com
omigod! ur lyrics rock! i think its completely a song because a song is just poetry put to instruments and a beat! poetry can be free verse, and i think that your lyrics will soar with flying colors someday! they!.!.!. omigod im speechless! they are amazing and i am in a situation very similar! ur a great lyricist! stick with it!Www@Enter-QA@Com
in the fourth little section thing it says "i see the way you look at her,what i would give to be her" and you need to change the second "her" to something else that rhymes cuz it sounds weird since its the same word!.!.!. also it should be longer and more up-beat and happyWww@Enter-QA@Com
10 wow that was great and yes it was meaning full and i can relate
if someone ever sings it or you sing it tell me
thanks
plumeria girlWww@Enter-QA@Com
if someone ever sings it or you sing it tell me
thanks
plumeria girlWww@Enter-QA@Com
I think you gave me my new song!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
2!. it seems really annoying, pointless, and short!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
it was awesome i would give it a 10 it was coolWww@Enter-QA@Com
w/ the right music!.!.!.it could take off!. 8Www@Enter-QA@Com
10!!! i love it!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
its pretty good, but!.!.!. "beated" isn't a word!.Www@Enter-QA@Com