Please..what you think about this lyrics that i wrote?(10 POINTS)?!
Question: Please!.!.what you think about this lyrics that i wrote!?(10 POINTS)!?
The name of the song is-No one is perfect
You think you know it all
but you still have some wins and some falls
Baby,don't think that you're better than the others
No one is perfect
Even when you fail
you will get up
and feel this all along
you gonna be strong
You know that everything can change
Your life can fall
Your words cannot be listen
One day your opinion will not worth
And remember that no one is perfect
One day this will happen with all
Everybody will fall one day
The life is a secret that no one can understand
The life is a history that will be a legend
The life is different than all the things in the world
The life is only one,!.So tell me!.!.what you're waiting for!?
If the door is closed!.!.c'mon let's open
No one is better than others
No one is perfect
What you think!?!?!?
Tell me please!.!.10 points
Just to remember!.!.I come from BrazilWww@Enter-QA@Com
You think you know it all
but you still have some wins and some falls
Baby,don't think that you're better than the others
No one is perfect
Even when you fail
you will get up
and feel this all along
you gonna be strong
You know that everything can change
Your life can fall
Your words cannot be listen
One day your opinion will not worth
And remember that no one is perfect
One day this will happen with all
Everybody will fall one day
The life is a secret that no one can understand
The life is a history that will be a legend
The life is different than all the things in the world
The life is only one,!.So tell me!.!.what you're waiting for!?
If the door is closed!.!.c'mon let's open
No one is better than others
No one is perfect
What you think!?!?!?
Tell me please!.!.10 points
Just to remember!.!.I come from BrazilWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
There are definitely true statements that are being made!.
I understand that you come from brazil (and that's great!!) but you might want to fix some of the "tenses" of your words to make them work/fit in the song; however, you should def!. try to put music and vocals into it and see what comes of it!. Good Luck!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I understand that you come from brazil (and that's great!!) but you might want to fix some of the "tenses" of your words to make them work/fit in the song; however, you should def!. try to put music and vocals into it and see what comes of it!. Good Luck!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
This sounds kind of like slow song maybe!. I come from a music family, and I think this is a good song, you have the talent to write songs!. Add a little bit of a drum track and an accoustic track, I think it could/would work out for you!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Ok well i like it, and i think you have potential for sure but you need to rhyme more, if you rhyme more in your lyrics, i bet you could make a killer song!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
that is the awesomest song!. i wouldn't be surprised to see it on the billboards top 100 in #1
no jokeWww@Enter-QA@Com
no jokeWww@Enter-QA@Com
Many lines are not grammatically correct!. What type of format is this!?
Pop, Rock, Rap!? For Rap this maybe allright since grammar is not an important part of that music!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Pop, Rock, Rap!? For Rap this maybe allright since grammar is not an important part of that music!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Well, I think its a bit long!. Your'e lines need tightening up a bit!. Try using a Thesaurus to find alternative words that might rhyme better!. Other than that,,,keep up the good work!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
You should have a duet with lindsay lohan it sounds like something she would sing!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
your words cannot be heard (3rd par!. 3rd line)!? just a suggestion
great by the wayWww@Enter-QA@Com
great by the wayWww@Enter-QA@Com
thats pretty goodWww@Enter-QA@Com
i love it!.!.!.you could go proWww@Enter-QA@Com