Rate these lyrics rhh?!

first of all, i can't believe i was runner up for that smosh beef-n-go lyrics contest!. out of 6000 people, i was one of the seven who won!. even though it's not considered rap lyrics, i just want you guys to rate it because i always go to rhh to send in my rap lyrics so that you guys can rate my raps!. anyways, here is my beef n go lyrics!. if you guys don't believe i won, go to this link in smosh's website so that i can proves to you guys that i won!. My name is Blake Honda, a 15 year old rapper from Hawaii!.

http://www!.smosh!.com/forums/index!.php!?sh!.!.!.

Beef 'n Go is really neat
It's the best food that you'll ever eat
All these girls just love this meat
But not the one between my feet
Beef 'n Go is a good idea
To have some awesome diarrhea
That'll make all the do do scatter
To make an delicious pupu platter
Beef 'n Go just makes me dance
Until I have to poop my pants
Just serve this to some hot girls
So that the other end won't hurlWww@Enter-QA@Com

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