What do you think of these lyrics? Part 2?!


Question: What do you think of these lyrics!? Part 2!?
Okay, so i thought of some new ones!. Decided to delete my other question!. Thank you to the people who answered it though :)

Glittering gold the hands
You hold out so willingly
Just like the glowing sands
That never wash away

And you, you are
The satin waves
That smoulder the opal bar
The sky of diamonds

Flicker in your favour
Like stars secret bonds
The azure sky, higherWww@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
I really like them!. They beautifully paint a picture!. I like your name as well!. Ava, that's my daughter's name!. Well, actually her full name is Avalynn!. But I like the lyrics! Careful, someone might steal those!Www@Enter-QA@Com

May I!? This is about someone thinking out loud thanking the sun for it's benevolence!. A definite Steely Dan song!. I picture smooth horns and tempered strings over a light uptempo groove with Donald Fagan singing in his guttural tone of cynicism accented by jazz piano virtuoso!.!.!.

Golden Sun

Glittering gold hands
Held out so willingly
Miles of bleach burning sands
In ultravilolet hue,
I dared my naked eyes
To gaze upon your wonders
Little children laugh and play
When you come shining through

And you, you are
An Approaching amber wave
That smoulders the opal bar
Why birds and bees give chase
Stars flicker in your favour
When half worlds fall sleep
As azure skies play saviours
To the secrets that you keep

We all must feel the fire
Sauteed by golden sun
From bird upon a wire
From waters life begun
We need you golden sun

The unlikeliest of burdens
Asked of this burning star
To grow what once was barren
By your celestial power
A yellow melodrama
Clouds atmosphere parade
A flower's fresh aroma
The trees give calming shade

And you, you are
An Approaching amber wave
That smoulders the opal bar
Into a creamy satin haze
Stars flicker in your favour
When half worlds fall sleep
As azure skies play saviours
To the secrets that you keep

We all must feel the fire
Sauteed by golden sun
From bird upon a wire
From waters life begun
We need you golden sunWww@Enter-QA@Com

its like a song for a dramatic soap bar commercialWww@Enter-QA@Com

there good, there good!Www@Enter-QA@Com

it looks good to read at!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

there great u have real talent!. Keep going!. Hey can u comment on mine!?Www@Enter-QA@Com



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