Are these good song lyrics/poem-ness?!
Question: Are these good song lyrics/poem-ness!?
I am stupid for thinking this could ever work!.
Why do things always
Have to be so complicated!?
I just wanna die!. Without
You I have no life and no will to live!.
Please just understand I would do anything just to be with you
My life is taking me down a different path!.
I hope like hell I’ll make it through
just one day without your voice,
Without your touch,
without your love!.
Today I find myself
Wondering why the hell it hurts so much!.
I miss you like crazy and
We’re still talking!.
My heart wants nothing more
than to be with you now!.
I find myself in a pool of doubt!.
Wondering just how I’ll be able
to make this work
I just want you to realize
that I love you
with everything that I am!.
All I want Is for you to help me
get through this
and quit doubting what I have!.
so what do you think!? bad!? lol it's all true though!.!.!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Why do things always
Have to be so complicated!?
I just wanna die!. Without
You I have no life and no will to live!.
Please just understand I would do anything just to be with you
My life is taking me down a different path!.
I hope like hell I’ll make it through
just one day without your voice,
Without your touch,
without your love!.
Today I find myself
Wondering why the hell it hurts so much!.
I miss you like crazy and
We’re still talking!.
My heart wants nothing more
than to be with you now!.
I find myself in a pool of doubt!.
Wondering just how I’ll be able
to make this work
I just want you to realize
that I love you
with everything that I am!.
All I want Is for you to help me
get through this
and quit doubting what I have!.
so what do you think!? bad!? lol it's all true though!.!.!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
I know it is stupid to believe!.
That this would not be complicated!.
I am dieing!. Without you
Everything is fading and stealing my will!.
What would it take for you to understand!.
Are my steps are meant for a different road!.
I hope like hell I’ll make it through
just one day without your voice,
Without your touch,
without your love!.
I have to question myself
why the hell does it hurts so much!.
Why do I miss you like crazy
and the words still linger!.
I hope like hell I’ll make it through
just one day without your voice,
Without your touch,
without your love!.
I am swimming (drowning) in a pool of doubt!.
How will I make this work!?
I need you to know
with everything that I am!.
that I love you
Will you help me
get through this
and end this doubting
I hope like hell I’ll make it through
just one day without your voice,
Without your touch,
without your love!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
That this would not be complicated!.
I am dieing!. Without you
Everything is fading and stealing my will!.
What would it take for you to understand!.
Are my steps are meant for a different road!.
I hope like hell I’ll make it through
just one day without your voice,
Without your touch,
without your love!.
I have to question myself
why the hell does it hurts so much!.
Why do I miss you like crazy
and the words still linger!.
I hope like hell I’ll make it through
just one day without your voice,
Without your touch,
without your love!.
I am swimming (drowning) in a pool of doubt!.
How will I make this work!?
I need you to know
with everything that I am!.
that I love you
Will you help me
get through this
and end this doubting
I hope like hell I’ll make it through
just one day without your voice,
Without your touch,
without your love!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
is this a suicide note or a song/poem!?
anyway, it lacks rhythm structure and flow to be a song, so I guess its a freestyle poem that lacks structure with syllable, rhyme scheme, or any pattern whatsoever!.
if it helps, there's always more fish in the sea!.!.!? i dunno, go read a book!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
anyway, it lacks rhythm structure and flow to be a song, so I guess its a freestyle poem that lacks structure with syllable, rhyme scheme, or any pattern whatsoever!.
if it helps, there's always more fish in the sea!.!.!? i dunno, go read a book!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Well, if you structure it like T S did, and you plan on singing it in a rock genre!.!.!.!. I got some wicked guitar riffs in head for it in the Emi locrian mode!.!.!.!. It'll rock!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
It's good!. :D
But the start is too suicidal!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
But the start is too suicidal!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
well its ok
http://last!.fm, http://allmuzz!.com, http://lavabeat!.netWww@Enter-QA@Com
http://last!.fm, http://allmuzz!.com, http://lavabeat!.netWww@Enter-QA@Com