Is this a good rap. Im only 11.?!
Question: Is this a good rap!. Im only 11!.!?
Yo, yo, yo!.
this is my song!.
Well heres how it goes,
ill step on your toes,
ya must have many friends but no foes,
Ya'll open a shop, but it'll get closed,
If ya keep messing with the rap-rap-rapping show!
Hey, you, The fat one over there,
"Me!?"
Yeah you, with the grey hair,
Ya momma's so fat, i thought she was a bear,
If ya look at me ill give you a glare,
But not too much, Cus' Youll get scared!.
Even ya mom says your fat,
Walking around with ya baseball cap,
Ya think ya all hard, just cus you spat!?
Well i got news for you, ill pop ya with a cap!Www@Enter-QA@Com
this is my song!.
Well heres how it goes,
ill step on your toes,
ya must have many friends but no foes,
Ya'll open a shop, but it'll get closed,
If ya keep messing with the rap-rap-rapping show!
Hey, you, The fat one over there,
"Me!?"
Yeah you, with the grey hair,
Ya momma's so fat, i thought she was a bear,
If ya look at me ill give you a glare,
But not too much, Cus' Youll get scared!.
Even ya mom says your fat,
Walking around with ya baseball cap,
Ya think ya all hard, just cus you spat!?
Well i got news for you, ill pop ya with a cap!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Dude, I presume this is a diss track!.
Need add at least like 3 more verses of that length!.
And writing lyrics is easy, actualy say them out loud, you might write yourself out of breath otherwise!.
For 10 I wouldn't really expect much, and thats what I got!.
You pretty much just slung words together for a laugh!.
Two verses dedicated to a fat joke, not healthy for a rap!.
E-mail me when you think you've improved it to your best please, I'd like to see what a 10 year old can do in the rapping world!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Need add at least like 3 more verses of that length!.
And writing lyrics is easy, actualy say them out loud, you might write yourself out of breath otherwise!.
For 10 I wouldn't really expect much, and thats what I got!.
You pretty much just slung words together for a laugh!.
Two verses dedicated to a fat joke, not healthy for a rap!.
E-mail me when you think you've improved it to your best please, I'd like to see what a 10 year old can do in the rapping world!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Liar!! In your last question you said you were 10!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Looks like a 3 year old wrote the lyrics!.!.get yourself weaned off rap, it's bad for your taste!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Do what you love, and you will get better with practiceWww@Enter-QA@Com
tat rap is wackkkWww@Enter-QA@Com
i saying this cause i care!.!.!. That was soo stale! yo u need to do better than that, and first of all have you ever heard a rapper crack on someone like that and for soo long!?, my lil sis could do better than that nd shes nineWww@Enter-QA@Com
I can give you an A for trying but over all that was bad!. If this is something you really want to do keep trying and see what happensWww@Enter-QA@Com
garbage and your not hard thinkin of sucky rhymes like thatWww@Enter-QA@Com
horrible, keep tryingWww@Enter-QA@Com