Let me know what you think of these lyrics i wrote.?!


Question: Let me know what you think of these lyrics i wrote!.!?
"Fading Senses"

Verse:
Reality seems out of reach
Whenever you’re around
I loose sight of what is real
And I cant hear a sound

My fingertips become numb
I can’t feel a thing
I could walk through fire
And not sense the sting

Chorus:
My senses are fading
As I get lost in your eyes
I make an attempt to
Make that first move
But then I, I realize
That your are no longer
In my, my presence
Just another wasted chance

Verse:
I become an addict
A constant search for you
It becomes a habit
A failure to break through

Then I have a relapse
The feelings still remain
And when I catch sight of you
My senses start to drain

Chorus

Verse:
And there it was
With a second glance
You came my way
With no hesitance

When you spoke
My knees got weak
I tried to respond
But I couldn’t speak

Because

My senses are fading
As I get lost in your eyesWww@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
u are fantastic=]
hopefully you can sing too
i really liked it
i write too
im not as talented as you
im impressed
i feel like you just wrote the song ive been trying 2 writeWww@Enter-QA@Com

its really good i would just work on having your chorus flow and match and rhyme a bit more!. love the word choice though!. keep writing (i write myself)Www@Enter-QA@Com

Wow thats really good!. Nice!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

thats pretty good!.!.!.keep up the good work!.!.!.
maybe just tweak a few things!.!.!.
but i was impressedWww@Enter-QA@Com

this rocks man!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com

I can hear pink floyd style music when i read this, "comfortably numb"Www@Enter-QA@Com

i really really like the lyrics!.
you're really good!Www@Enter-QA@Com

it's really niceWww@Enter-QA@Com



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