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Question: I just wrote these lyrics!. I wrote it kind of quick!. Let me know me know what you honestly think about them!.!?
"Fading Senses"

Verse:
Reality seems out of reach
Whenever you’re around
I loose sight of what is real
And I cant hear a sound

My fingertips become numb
I can’t feel a thing
I could walk through fire
And not sense the sting

Chorus:
My senses are fading
As I get lost in your eyes
I make an attempt to
Make that first move
But then I, I realize
That your are no longer
In my, my presence
Just another wasted chance

Verse:
I become an addict
A constant search for you
It becomes a habit
A failure to break through

Then I have a relapse
The feelings still remain
And when I catch sight of you
My senses start to drain

Chorus

Verse:
And there it was
With a second glance
You came my way
With no hesitance

When you spoke
My knees got weak
I tried to respond
But I couldn’t speak

Because

My senses are fading
As I get lost in your eyesWww@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
niiiiiiiiiiiiice! #1 I would personaly say!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

i like them theyre goodWww@Enter-QA@Com

well its good but when u write a song the chorus has to be the same but other then that it sounds like a winner to meWww@Enter-QA@Com



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