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Question: I just wrote these lyrics!. I wrote it kind of quick!. Let me know me know what you honestly think about them!.!?
"Fading Senses"
Verse:
Reality seems out of reach
Whenever you’re around
I loose sight of what is real
And I cant hear a sound
My fingertips become numb
I can’t feel a thing
I could walk through fire
And not sense the sting
Chorus:
My senses are fading
As I get lost in your eyes
I make an attempt to
Make that first move
But then I, I realize
That your are no longer
In my, my presence
Just another wasted chance
Verse:
I become an addict
A constant search for you
It becomes a habit
A failure to break through
Then I have a relapse
The feelings still remain
And when I catch sight of you
My senses start to drain
Chorus
Verse:
And there it was
With a second glance
You came my way
With no hesitance
When you spoke
My knees got weak
I tried to respond
But I couldn’t speak
Because
My senses are fading
As I get lost in your eyesWww@Enter-QA@Com
Verse:
Reality seems out of reach
Whenever you’re around
I loose sight of what is real
And I cant hear a sound
My fingertips become numb
I can’t feel a thing
I could walk through fire
And not sense the sting
Chorus:
My senses are fading
As I get lost in your eyes
I make an attempt to
Make that first move
But then I, I realize
That your are no longer
In my, my presence
Just another wasted chance
Verse:
I become an addict
A constant search for you
It becomes a habit
A failure to break through
Then I have a relapse
The feelings still remain
And when I catch sight of you
My senses start to drain
Chorus
Verse:
And there it was
With a second glance
You came my way
With no hesitance
When you spoke
My knees got weak
I tried to respond
But I couldn’t speak
Because
My senses are fading
As I get lost in your eyesWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
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i like them theyre goodWww@Enter-QA@Com
well its good but when u write a song the chorus has to be the same but other then that it sounds like a winner to meWww@Enter-QA@Com