Hows this for the first lines of lyrics for a song?!
Question: Hows this for the first lines of lyrics for a song!?
I get smashed at the bar every night
They don't care about my age, width, or height
The govenments taken away my every right
But I wont give up the fightWww@Enter-QA@Com
They don't care about my age, width, or height
The govenments taken away my every right
But I wont give up the fightWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Width!? I don't like that word there!. Try the word sex instead of width!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
uhhh is it a rap song!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
gay, yes!.
good, almostWww@Enter-QA@Com
good, almostWww@Enter-QA@Com
The last line needs lengthening but overall - sounds pretty good and flows well!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Yea it rhymes but it dont make any sense!. You go in a matter of 2 seconds from talkin about bein at a bar to the goverment takin away your rights!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
yeah great unless u want it to be a big hit!?!?Kind of a bad influence!.!.!.nice rhymes though i guessWww@Enter-QA@Com
Personally, not crazy about it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
boy you suck dont write songs please you are giving me a headacheWww@Enter-QA@Com
sounds more like a chorus if u ask me, very good though, keep up the good work
, start up with something softer!.!. u can def scream out government taken away my every right, and so on, so it seems more like a chorus cuz ofthat =]
hope i helpedWww@Enter-QA@Com
, start up with something softer!.!. u can def scream out government taken away my every right, and so on, so it seems more like a chorus cuz ofthat =]
hope i helpedWww@Enter-QA@Com
well it rhymes!.!.!.!. but whats it about cuz it sounds pretty good!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
yeah its okay
it'd be cool
good luck with the rest of itWww@Enter-QA@Com
it'd be cool
good luck with the rest of itWww@Enter-QA@Com
lose the word widthWww@Enter-QA@Com
alrite i guess, but im not realy a fan of lyrics that has every line rhymingWww@Enter-QA@Com
Yea, its good
why you writing songs
good luck :DWww@Enter-QA@Com
why you writing songs
good luck :DWww@Enter-QA@Com
uhh!.!.seems pretty political!.!. mine's better!.!.
I'm tired of hearin' all this ish 'bout the dirty dirty
I'm from Canada muhfcukka, straight chillin', minus 30Www@Enter-QA@Com
I'm tired of hearin' all this ish 'bout the dirty dirty
I'm from Canada muhfcukka, straight chillin', minus 30Www@Enter-QA@Com
That depends what kind of music it is!. If its rock or rap, then their okay!. I don't think they could fit with any other kind of music!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
it's good, i lyk it
keep it upWww@Enter-QA@Com
keep it upWww@Enter-QA@Com
umm, don't like it becasue you say "the governments taken away my every right" but also say your sitting at a bar getting smashed and they don't care about you age, width or hight!. The government controlls just about everything about a bar, including how old you have to be to drink!. It's contradictory!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
its really dumb!.!.!.
sorryWww@Enter-QA@Com
sorryWww@Enter-QA@Com