I wrote these myself?!
Question: I wrote these myself!?
so i wrote this song myself its kinda hard to find the right tune to sing it in but i found one that works for me!.if you have ANY suggestions please state them!.and if they remind you of a song please tell me as well!.so here it is
~ i thought you were smiling at me so i walked on over but then i saw a girl walk right through my sha-a-dow i turned around when you looked toward me i saw you and got nervous but now i seeeeeee when i tried to let you by ad you didnt even look me in the eyes i told you we need to talk but i just couldn't get it out right, oh i couldnt even get it out right so now here we are and we are so close and you wink at me like your miiine we just mite get it right this time oh we just mite get it right this time when we see each other now we know we're together i feel comfotable telling you who i really am so here i gooooooo ohhh ohh ohh ohh!.
so yeah that was my song im 14 please don't write anything mean!. best answer will go to the person who really helped me outWww@Enter-QA@Com
~ i thought you were smiling at me so i walked on over but then i saw a girl walk right through my sha-a-dow i turned around when you looked toward me i saw you and got nervous but now i seeeeeee when i tried to let you by ad you didnt even look me in the eyes i told you we need to talk but i just couldn't get it out right, oh i couldnt even get it out right so now here we are and we are so close and you wink at me like your miiine we just mite get it right this time oh we just mite get it right this time when we see each other now we know we're together i feel comfotable telling you who i really am so here i gooooooo ohhh ohh ohh ohh!.
so yeah that was my song im 14 please don't write anything mean!. best answer will go to the person who really helped me outWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
You're on your way!.
Keep a scrapbook of the creative thoughts going on in your head!. When the mood strikes you to create a song, you will have your previous thoughts on paper to play with!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Keep a scrapbook of the creative thoughts going on in your head!. When the mood strikes you to create a song, you will have your previous thoughts on paper to play with!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
backsteet boys might be interested!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
You could have a little rhyme in it, but just remember: edit them as much as you need until they sound good to you, and lyrics make up only half of the song, the way you sing it matters just as much!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
you could maybe have a cowboy them to it, you know how they sing!?
well, just a suggestion!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
well, just a suggestion!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
seeeeeeeeee when i tried to let you by!.
What a lovely song!Www@Enter-QA@Com
What a lovely song!Www@Enter-QA@Com
its pretty good!.
"mite get it right this time oh we just mite get it right this time"!.!.!.this part is pretty catchy!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
"mite get it right this time oh we just mite get it right this time"!.!.!.this part is pretty catchy!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I just sang this song to myself and I had a really nice beat to it!.
I wish you could of heard it!. =/
Da da da da da, da da da da da!.
Something like that!.
I'm sorry I couldn't be more help!.
I'm 14 too and I am also a songwriter!.
I like your style!.
But it's not original enough!.
Like, the words are so typical!.
Make it interesting!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I wish you could of heard it!. =/
Da da da da da, da da da da da!.
Something like that!.
I'm sorry I couldn't be more help!.
I'm 14 too and I am also a songwriter!.
I like your style!.
But it's not original enough!.
Like, the words are so typical!.
Make it interesting!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
sounds like something hannah montana would singWww@Enter-QA@Com
hmmm good, 3/5 for your age
keep tryingWww@Enter-QA@Com
keep tryingWww@Enter-QA@Com
get it out right, oh i couldnt even get it out right
look it over not really my favorite line i like it better like!.
get it out right, oh i couldnt get it out right, hey its just me though:)
GOOD LUCK
nice songWww@Enter-QA@Com
look it over not really my favorite line i like it better like!.
get it out right, oh i couldnt get it out right, hey its just me though:)
GOOD LUCK
nice songWww@Enter-QA@Com
That's a really great song!! My suggestions are: keep on doing your thing! There's really not much you can change or do to your song!.!.!.!.maybe make it a little bit longer!. Good luck with this!Www@Enter-QA@Com
i think it's too literal!. it just flat out tells you what happens!. you need to use some cool words and phrases if you want people to be interested in it!. for example, in the song Jesus of Suburbia by Green Day, one of the lines goes: "Jimmy died today, He blew his brains out into the bay" you think it means he's committing suicide, but it's actually a reference to how he feels inside!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
i dont know!. but i really really really really really really really really really really really really really really realy really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really like it!.!.!.no!. i love it!. its awesome!.!.
sorry tho!. i cant help yu out!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
sorry tho!. i cant help yu out!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
THAT IS AN alsoME SONG I CAN TOTALY RELATE I LOVE THIS SONG I HOPE SOMEDAY U GET OUT A CD I AN SHURE U WILL THO AND WHEN U DO I WILL B FIRST ONE TO GET IT U ROCK :-)Www@Enter-QA@Com