I wrote some lyrics =) please check em out--suggestion?!
Question: please im only 13 dont rate me as a well yeah
Remember the first time
she stared into your eyes
remember it well
she stared into mine
Those were the days
when we could stop and gaze
without cause
without care
those were the days
Remember the first time
she smiled at you
remember it well
that was your cue
Those were the days
when we could stop and gaze
without cause
without care
those were the days
Those were the days
i wished would last
through the haze
i dawned on my past
i cant have any regrets
but i just cant forget
how those were the days
Remember the first time
your lips met to fast
remember it well
for its not the last
Those were the days
when we could stop and gaze
without cause
without care
those were the days
But now its not like that
in this crazy world
we cant stop and gaze
and ive forgotten that girl
Answers: please im only 13 dont rate me as a well yeah
Remember the first time
she stared into your eyes
remember it well
she stared into mine
Those were the days
when we could stop and gaze
without cause
without care
those were the days
Remember the first time
she smiled at you
remember it well
that was your cue
Those were the days
when we could stop and gaze
without cause
without care
those were the days
Those were the days
i wished would last
through the haze
i dawned on my past
i cant have any regrets
but i just cant forget
how those were the days
Remember the first time
your lips met to fast
remember it well
for its not the last
Those were the days
when we could stop and gaze
without cause
without care
those were the days
But now its not like that
in this crazy world
we cant stop and gaze
and ive forgotten that girl
they're cute. Sounds like you wrote them with someone in mind :)
there ok
theyre pretty
Nice...cute :) I like them keep it up!
Seems a little elementary
I like them a lot. :D
Hey, if you're interested, I play the guitar and am looking for somebody to record on the computer with, and I like your lyrics. :)
There really Good. .x
do people write songs that arent about love anymore? geeeez
the measure needs some work, I think
it doesn't sound quite... flowy because the syllable length of the lines varies and doesn't quite fit together
read it aloud to yourself
Nice Words Keep it up :)
its amazing ! its amazing! have you tried putting it as a track have u thought of its name
that was so good! i think u should call the song "Those were the days" u r a good song writer! keep it up!
To be 13 i would say they are awesome! they need a littlw work..but hey nobodys perfect!! keep it up!!!!!!!1