What do you think of my song? It's just the first verse of a standard twelve!
Question: When a man finds a woman
Lord you know he loses his head
Yeah when a man finds a woman
Lord you know he loses his head
'Cos when that man finds that woman
All he wants to do is get her into bed
Answers: When a man finds a woman
Lord you know he loses his head
Yeah when a man finds a woman
Lord you know he loses his head
'Cos when that man finds that woman
All he wants to do is get her into bed
its good.
but change the second (Lord you know he loses his head)
to ryhme with something else.
its good though
I like it. Make sure you include some guitar like Lightin' Hopkins and a little blues harmonica like Little Walter.
I am giving you my professional opinion:
Sounds to familiar . Its been done before
Suggestions:
Keep trying and be more original , and dont restrict your self to 12 bars thats been over done