What do you think of these rap lyrics. They are not done yet.?!
Question: i get cash like i run a bank
shot them missiles you done sank
when i kill the beat yall say reckless
but you dont know even what respect is
You see me on ya television screens
gettin payed for all them movie scenes
ya ready know you want the cd
im so high up you cant see me
you blast me so i blast back
im bringing all the energy like a battery pack
My flow is extraordinary
yours is just ordinary
Not done yet but still tell me what you think.
Answers: i get cash like i run a bank
shot them missiles you done sank
when i kill the beat yall say reckless
but you dont know even what respect is
You see me on ya television screens
gettin payed for all them movie scenes
ya ready know you want the cd
im so high up you cant see me
you blast me so i blast back
im bringing all the energy like a battery pack
My flow is extraordinary
yours is just ordinary
Not done yet but still tell me what you think.
I got more money than can fit in the bank
in the pool with my jewlery, I'm drownin', I sank
but I'm chillin', I take risks, I'm known as reckless
so when you pull me out the pool I'll show you what respect is
blah blah blah
Your lines have to connect with one another. They aren't so good when it's just a collection of random statements. Also, rhyming extraordinary with ordinary is no fun and is considered "wack." Try this:
My flow is extraordinary
like blood in the coronary
aertery.
This rap s*** is a part of me.
Hope this helped!
your probably white they suck whitie
Rap sucks. D:
But, I guess, if I liked rap then I'd say the lyrics are pretty good.
to be honest there easy rap lyrics to come up simple stuff but there ok
dam vato dey ight
but u white jus a question aint here 2 offend
I give you props, at least you can write something, but its gotta be legit man. It can't be just like I'm the best, I get all the girls, I'm rich blah blah blah, ESPECIALLY if you don't have that.
Also try a few more complex words to rhyme with. Good luck my man.
shallow, short, some of them make sense, and oh yea wack. I'm really sorry but find a new hobby.
it sucks. you have to put more mulites, inner rhymes, alliteration, consonance, assonance and better metaphors or else you're going to be more worse than 50 cent or even soulja boy