What do you think of my lyrics to the song Why i wrote?!
Question: We let people get away with murder,
drug uses,
and alchohol.
There's somthing we're not seeing,
something,
we're not seeing at all.
We leave the pain behind us.
The hurt is left to come.
your heartbeat,
is like the beating of a drum.
and i ask,
(chorus)
why do we do these things,
that let us give and bring,
pain to eachother,
your own brother.
It's not a lifestyle,
it's an act.
you let yourself stay in contact,
with your pain,
there's nothing to gain.
Why?
You see we're in this place,
that overpowers us.
We come together,
and then we go.
but we don't lose our focus.
we'll pray and pray,
for another day,
with happieness,
and love.
The hearts and souls and caring
of the people from above.
And i scream,
(chorus)
Answers: We let people get away with murder,
drug uses,
and alchohol.
There's somthing we're not seeing,
something,
we're not seeing at all.
We leave the pain behind us.
The hurt is left to come.
your heartbeat,
is like the beating of a drum.
and i ask,
(chorus)
why do we do these things,
that let us give and bring,
pain to eachother,
your own brother.
It's not a lifestyle,
it's an act.
you let yourself stay in contact,
with your pain,
there's nothing to gain.
Why?
You see we're in this place,
that overpowers us.
We come together,
and then we go.
but we don't lose our focus.
we'll pray and pray,
for another day,
with happieness,
and love.
The hearts and souls and caring
of the people from above.
And i scream,
(chorus)
wow, princess the lyrics are amazing. I would love to hear the tune.
If you wrote this..you are very talented, its really great.
How can I hear the tune? Have you recorded it...on your pc or something?
Keep up the good work
:)
I'm not sure to be honest...sounds a bit done but then it depends on the voice and music...
pretty good song!!!!! i wish i knew the tune though
You know i really like this song because unlike most songs nowdays it really tells a story. It takes u through somethin that is happenin in our world today. I really do like it. Has some really deep lyrics.
cool:)
wow dats som real lyrics... all u need is a nice beat to go with it.. but 4 real if u find your self a beat da songs gonna be hot...