Rate my rap 1-10?!
Question: i got four words nicca f**k u pay me
i get wild numbers like sudokus on rabies
crack dealer swag u would swear im from tha 80's
im bout to takeover like Jay-Z
but im like Lucifer, n she's tha dawn of my mornin
hook up wit em den have em gone in tha mornin
u wack rappers borin i been fly since my birthdate
n i'll rock ya sphere like a earthquake, in tha worst way
whoa, leave u wit nothin more than a bouquet
n I aint God but i make ur ho-lay
am i hallucinating or am i really that sick?
did i get 2 constipated or am i really that sh1t?
thatz it, im raw like a deviled egg
im a walkin fire boi, like im the devil's legs
Mayweather, De la hoya, Liston, Mike Tyson
im undisputed champ, dont play urself like dykes
i dont need 5 mics, all i need iz one
like Nas, im God's son, like Hov ya lost one, so u none
nathan, deleted, erased
i got dis rappin on lock plus tha key 2 tha safe
(thatz all i can get on here)
Answers: i got four words nicca f**k u pay me
i get wild numbers like sudokus on rabies
crack dealer swag u would swear im from tha 80's
im bout to takeover like Jay-Z
but im like Lucifer, n she's tha dawn of my mornin
hook up wit em den have em gone in tha mornin
u wack rappers borin i been fly since my birthdate
n i'll rock ya sphere like a earthquake, in tha worst way
whoa, leave u wit nothin more than a bouquet
n I aint God but i make ur ho-lay
am i hallucinating or am i really that sick?
did i get 2 constipated or am i really that sh1t?
thatz it, im raw like a deviled egg
im a walkin fire boi, like im the devil's legs
Mayweather, De la hoya, Liston, Mike Tyson
im undisputed champ, dont play urself like dykes
i dont need 5 mics, all i need iz one
like Nas, im God's son, like Hov ya lost one, so u none
nathan, deleted, erased
i got dis rappin on lock plus tha key 2 tha safe
(thatz all i can get on here)
yo tell me y i aint herd nutin lik dat since pac wuz in da game ya digg dats some real sh!t . yo hit ma numba up ima c bout signin u 4109176935
***** wack homie
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6/10
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oh my god genius thats a 12 out of 10
its not bad, like 6
I don't like rap but it is good 10000000/10 write some more they aren't bad! You have natural talent dude keep up the good work!
wow um. yea soo.....a 10...
it needs a beat, when i listen to rap i dont really listen to the lyrics, i listen to the flow. maybe it would work, upload a vid on youtube or something
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7/10
-20
Wow original.....
its pretty good
id take a look at other rappers lyrics and see if you can improve on it
I never knew morning rhymed with morning. You're amazing man. Maybe you can make it one day.... SIKE.
i think that's better than my rap.
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5.
Good job, I liked it! You're pretty good, luv how everything flowed!! Maybe cut out the cussing, it's kinda not needed. Other than that, loved it, 120%!! Keep writing.
-4. That Sucked. You need to go to the local community college and enroll in a poetry class, just to actually learn how to give something structure and make it rhyme and just learn the different methods of rhyming . 'cause this is simpleton s**t
that was pretty sick but your ******* gay for rhyming mornin with mornin dumb ***** lol over all an 8
I dont' have a lot of experience with rap but I think it's great.
You just have to be careful of how to rap it because it's not all smooth. A little wordy in some parts. Lots of stuff doesnt' really make so much sense. It's a bit too random. "leave you with nothing more than a bouquet"? hmmm.
I do like some parts. The last line is really cool. I like the first four lines, they go well but the fourth line needs to be a bit longer to even out the beats. The "did i get 2 constipated or am i really that sh it" is funny. And I like the thing about Mike Tyson.
pretty good, i guess.
hmmmm.
7 1/2
20
its pretty sick but cant u put just a little bit of meaning into it? like just something to put it all together instead of just a buncha phrases... if this is a freestyle then its good tho
7
that is the worst rap i have eva heard and i listen to people rap every day and P.S. im not a white person
4/10 Seems like you just got a bunch of rhymes that many rappers have already used and recycled it into some garbage. I
6/10, it was okay
i hope your not really that conceited, lol
imma say 5.
that **** was really good man it seems like you could make it in the industry.I would give it like a 9
okay, out of ten? ur a ten... i liked it!! 10/10! 8 )
u should keep writting!!!!!