How does my ad sound? should i leave out the age?!


Question: I AM 21 YEAR OLD STUDENT LOOKING FOR MUSICIANS INTERESTED IN STARTING A ALTERNATIVE, ROCK/POP BAND TO PERFORM WITH OR JUST FOR FUN!
I AM ALSO LOOKING FOR PEOPLE TO COLLABERATE WITH THAT CAN WRITE HIP HOP, ROCK/POP,OR ALTERNATIVE SONGS. IF YOU ARE INTERESTED PLEASE CONTACT ME.


Answers: I AM 21 YEAR OLD STUDENT LOOKING FOR MUSICIANS INTERESTED IN STARTING A ALTERNATIVE, ROCK/POP BAND TO PERFORM WITH OR JUST FOR FUN!
I AM ALSO LOOKING FOR PEOPLE TO COLLABERATE WITH THAT CAN WRITE HIP HOP, ROCK/POP,OR ALTERNATIVE SONGS. IF YOU ARE INTERESTED PLEASE CONTACT ME.

"I'm also looking for songwriting collaborators in the genres of ___".

The rest is fine, but drop the capslock. Most people instinctively skip past capslock posts.

Best of luck to you!

Add in some bands that you're influenced by. A lot of people have a lot of different ideas about what the genres you've listed include. If you add in some bands that you like, then you remove all doubt and wont get as many time wasters.

Good luck.



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