Does this song sound okay? (it's rap/hip-hop)?!


Question: i wrote this song it's complete unpolised so it sounds kind of bad at some parts but I just wanna know your opinions.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=0KJJRb5uJs4


Answers: i wrote this song it's complete unpolised so it sounds kind of bad at some parts but I just wanna know your opinions.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=0KJJRb5uJs4

it kinda suck
i would advice you to quit rapping
but that's just my opinion

If you make it flow a bit more then it'd be great :] Well done...just don't make it choppy...look at kanye or clipse in their transitions in songs..GOOD song tho

its ok needs work and get some more of ur own lyrics sum are from other songs but its pretty good so far! GOOD Luck!

great song


ps cant stand listnin to yo voice

I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just being honest. Your flow sounds like a ten year old reading lyrics from a piece of paper.

ummmm...no go to college and get a job because being a famous rapper is not in your future.

No Disrespect...but I wasnt feeling it...I dont think that Id like it polished either...



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