Is this song i wrote any good?!
Question: i'm only 11 so it might be bad but here it is:
She thinks about you everyday
Wonderin if you're alright
She sits there imaginin
you're right there by her side
She lies in her bed and
tries to go to sleep
But knowing you're not with her makes her really really weak
She misses you, She misses you so, so bad
Just thinkin bout you makes her really sad
She knows its not forever but its hard to hold back the tears
She misses you and wants you here
She wishes on her wishin star
that you'll be with her
She tries to remeber what you did
but its all such a blur
She lies in her bed and
tries to go to sleep
Knowing you're not with her makes her really really weak
She misses you, she misses you so so bad
Just thinkin bout you makes her realy sad
She knows its not forever
but its hard to hold back the tears
She misses you and wants you here
I didn't write the bridge yet.... so thats all i have..... do you like it? any suggestions?
Answers: i'm only 11 so it might be bad but here it is:
She thinks about you everyday
Wonderin if you're alright
She sits there imaginin
you're right there by her side
She lies in her bed and
tries to go to sleep
But knowing you're not with her makes her really really weak
She misses you, She misses you so, so bad
Just thinkin bout you makes her really sad
She knows its not forever but its hard to hold back the tears
She misses you and wants you here
She wishes on her wishin star
that you'll be with her
She tries to remeber what you did
but its all such a blur
She lies in her bed and
tries to go to sleep
Knowing you're not with her makes her really really weak
She misses you, she misses you so so bad
Just thinkin bout you makes her realy sad
She knows its not forever
but its hard to hold back the tears
She misses you and wants you here
I didn't write the bridge yet.... so thats all i have..... do you like it? any suggestions?
um...no.
-No one can correct or give you different ideas because no one here knows the beat or rhythm of your song. So im gonna be "smart" and not change anything about these lyrics u made up. Dont listen to them fools trying to screw up your song..Just leave it :p
yea its really god
it is really good
i really like it & it's really cool , go for it , and email me your album !
That's a good song, I don't know what it is, but I love sad songs.
Totally! Its great!! You go girl!!!
Can I use them?
i love it but dont try to make it rhyme. if you want a bridge here is one:
i never thought i'll say this but
since day one i believed you were mine
and i won't care about anyting else
if the earth goes on fire
i'll still stay here with you forever
i hope you liked it