10 points tell me what you think!!! do you like my lyrics, it's just the cho!
Question: well, that's just like you
nothing to say and nothing to prove
just please don't get me wrong
all i ever wanted was the truth
Answers: well, that's just like you
nothing to say and nothing to prove
just please don't get me wrong
all i ever wanted was the truth
it perfect so far when it comes platinum dont forget me
so far so good...keep going. you may have something good.
I like them. I guess its about someone who cheated? Oh well, I still like them...
very good!
I like it.
They're not bad, but not good. I'd say they're typical.
Not trying to be harsh though.
Eh, its kinda straightforward. The audience may get bored with lyrics that simply state what youre thinking. More artistically you should use metaphors and analogies, maybe some word play or something. Also try to spice up the rhyme scheme to something other than AABA. The chorus is a dangerous part to start also while writing lyrics...
Just my opinion :D
AWESOME!!! you should finish the song and record it, it seems like a nice chorus!!!!
keep on going dude!
thats a great chorus. hope i hear it on the radio someday!
Yeah thats cool!
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good.