Trying to write a song, some help with the lyrics?!
Question: now, im going threw a hard time with moveing and all, and when i leave i want to record this song, over a slideshow of all pictures of me and my friends
i want the song to send this message... : memories are memories, and we sometimes just have to leave them behind, its okay to look back sometimes, but we cant live in the past. we grow older every day ...and we just have to move on.
this is what i have so far:
ill miss you...
ill miss you...
ill miss the life i once knew...
ill miss everything i ever known
sometimes life just puts us in spots ware we dont...
dont get to have a say in anything
or everything we ever known
i want it to be sad, but at the same time not boreing, some rymes would be nice (: can someone help please?
Answers: now, im going threw a hard time with moveing and all, and when i leave i want to record this song, over a slideshow of all pictures of me and my friends
i want the song to send this message... : memories are memories, and we sometimes just have to leave them behind, its okay to look back sometimes, but we cant live in the past. we grow older every day ...and we just have to move on.
this is what i have so far:
ill miss you...
ill miss you...
ill miss the life i once knew...
ill miss everything i ever known
sometimes life just puts us in spots ware we dont...
dont get to have a say in anything
or everything we ever known
i want it to be sad, but at the same time not boreing, some rymes would be nice (: can someone help please?
if these are the only words ill ever say to you again please can I say a million words? CAUSE IF YOU DOnt let anyone else take my place and you don't let anyone else see my face cuz im saving it for you but promise me you'll leave the door open to let me in to your heart whenever you want me so i believe there's a way you can see me before I say ill miss u ill miss u ill miss u but thinking anyway i will see you someday and until I do what will you? say me name when you need a hand and only take mine TO SAVE THE LIGHT FROM THE BLACK SAD NIGHT
SHAZAM!!!!! HOW'S THAT?
Life goes on and everything will be OK
I know well see each other on another day
so dont be sad as we part are ways
just remember me when you see the suns rays
Sorry, your question reads bad and it is very hard to understand, try again.
The sad thing is your misuse and misspelling of words.
Let me ask you a question? Okay, you're going "through" a hard time moving somewhere, and when you arrive where you are moving to, you want to record a song about your friends and memories you left behind? Why would you leave your memories behind? Aren't memories what you take with you? They're in your head! Write about THAT!
Another question: So, what will you do with that slide show once you are finished with it? Sit and cry as you watch it once every day? Send it to your friends and make them cry every time they look at it? And if you move on, aren't you just ending your friendships? Can't your friendships remain by writing letters and calling them on the telephone and sending them electronic messages ("e-mails") ????
Can't your song say THAT?????
I'm a songwriter and really good at rhyming (if I do say so myself) but really I can't help ya here. That's just me. I don't want to sound rude but I think you should start over. Try some of others peoples answers cause mine probably won't help.
nothing ever stays the same
we grow older everyday
the passed is always left behind
but when we look inside
we relize all the memories we had
when i look back i feel so sad
but in a way im glad cos of all the good times we had
memories are memories
its all in the past
time seems to go by so fast
time to move on
so im writing this song
i need u to know wat u all ment to me
maybe then the passed can set me free
thats what ive wrote so far
it write more if you want me to finish it but ive just wrote a lil bit to see if you like it! by the way i wrote this fast if i had like a day i could write a better 1
hmm.
WELL...
I moved from california to Idaho when Iwas 10.
[12 now]
TALK ABOUT A big CHANGE!
I cant give you good lyrics.
But.. how about something like life goes on and that we dont want it to.
But new and bigger things happen to us for what happens to us.
We will have memories stuck with us but we cant hold on to them forever.
Because we cant make new ones if we hold on to old ones.
Say something like "ill miss you for sure,but I need to go on.I wont forget the time................or when..................but if thats all I can tell me own kids.thats not good enough so im moving on now.Fate will bring us together agin.just not today"