Is my lyric good?!
Question: Im looking at you all day and night
Im trying to figure out a way to say that i'm sorryy
Whenever I see your smile
Tears run down my face
Now I feel all the pain
Ive caused you
And now I see all the shame iv'e done
Was it something I said or
Was it something I did?
I didn’t mean to break your heart
[1st verse]Im sry for the things ive said
Just like a child I lost my head
I should have known from the start
Id break ur heart
Im sorry for the things ive I done
I know that im the foolish one
Now that I see whos to blame
Im so ashamed
go back to 1st verse then read 2nd, 3rd
[2nd verse]Just give me a chance just one more chancee
Ill know that you’ll probably regret it
But baby wont u give me a chanceee
[3rd verse] Was it something I said or
Was it somthin I did?
I didn’t mean to break ur heart
but please forgive me
Answers: Im looking at you all day and night
Im trying to figure out a way to say that i'm sorryy
Whenever I see your smile
Tears run down my face
Now I feel all the pain
Ive caused you
And now I see all the shame iv'e done
Was it something I said or
Was it something I did?
I didn’t mean to break your heart
[1st verse]Im sry for the things ive said
Just like a child I lost my head
I should have known from the start
Id break ur heart
Im sorry for the things ive I done
I know that im the foolish one
Now that I see whos to blame
Im so ashamed
go back to 1st verse then read 2nd, 3rd
[2nd verse]Just give me a chance just one more chancee
Ill know that you’ll probably regret it
But baby wont u give me a chanceee
[3rd verse] Was it something I said or
Was it somthin I did?
I didn’t mean to break ur heart
but please forgive me
good rhymical order but its better if you got a cool chorus
verses are very inspiring, straight to the point, and also put dat persons name to make it emotional