Rate my rap 1-5?!
Question: This is just a little one i made! Kinda joking around, so dont take it to seriously! Just need to know if i should add on, heres just a sample!
I am white and im just fifteen
Still got the rhymes that are keen
Every line comes from the soul
so hot make u stop, drop, and roll
Better listen to every word i say
Im like k-i-l-l witout the k
MTV proves that hiphop is dead!
Real MC? Just put on soujla boy instead.
Signing people like him are just a bad decision,fake rappers that cant even invision being in the underground division.
Used to be a time when it was all about respect, now its all about the money they collect.
Answers: This is just a little one i made! Kinda joking around, so dont take it to seriously! Just need to know if i should add on, heres just a sample!
I am white and im just fifteen
Still got the rhymes that are keen
Every line comes from the soul
so hot make u stop, drop, and roll
Better listen to every word i say
Im like k-i-l-l witout the k
MTV proves that hiphop is dead!
Real MC? Just put on soujla boy instead.
Signing people like him are just a bad decision,fake rappers that cant even invision being in the underground division.
Used to be a time when it was all about respect, now its all about the money they collect.
4/5,pretty good and hiphop isn't dead btw. You had some good lines there, try to use internals and multi rhymes every now and then. Try some
http://www.flocabulary.com/multies.html
Try some similes and metaphors too.
5. cool.
dude 10.
your hella good.
speak the truth fool.
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we dont need to hear anymore about soulja boy, hip hop is dead, or what other rappers is doin
started off shaky but you came back. i give it a 3 and half. a good effort. keep at it
lose tha first to lines and its coooo. u get a 5 for spitin tha truth kid
i give it a 3 the first half was pretty weak but the end was good, the last 2 lines mainly
never say keen in a verse....
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AND hip hop not dead hip hop is a culture look it up.. It includes rap which is the real name rap..
GET OUT OF YOUR HOUSE AND GO SMOKE WEED WITH PEOPLE.. BE ILL 4 real......respect the culture and pray to WU TANG CLAN> 4 real we smoking day long.. A mainly ill conservatvies everywere., 49 is full of the realiest teens to adults everywere.. AND ITS not ghetto its like The movie DAZED AND CONFUsed
wtf about the last response.
I like the end. The part about how it used to be about respect. I dont personally like rap or hip hop, but I certainly think there should be more with positive lyrics, and not some fat guy with gold teeth and a cadillac escalade rapping about his mansion and his phat sneaker collection...
Bob Marley bring back the love
noone takes the time to listen mayne whats missing mayne? whats missing mayne nas, jay, n eminem- biggie, pac, n dre, each every rapper sounding shame no snoop, or bg... cant be soulja boy fault but noone reconize soulja slim when he drop all this talk bout hip hop dead when country neva lived all these folk rap unsigned all these folk signed cant rap cant find a rhythem find the truth in bullsheit which way to go half-azz songs cds with 1 song outta 20 commertial bullsheit play all day fakes cant even make a beat......defeat... chillin1
sweet thing dawg 500
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no more white boyz in the rap world!
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where's the swearin'
you aint graduate yet till yo do that'
yo aint no playa yet