What do u think of the lyrics to my new song called Paige(The ***** Song)?!
Question: Seems like not long ago,
that you said u were into me,
but i saw through ur lies and deceit,
cuz when u turned on me,
it became so clear you see,
that you were never deserving of me
Chorus: So here's to you ************,
you cheated on me you *****,
I thought u were my friend,
but this has gotta end,
cuz when you lied,
a part of me died inside,
so go away and i don't wanna see you no more
But then you said that you were having ur moment,
and now it's plain to see that ur alibis never cease to fool me,
cuz its been a long time since i ditched you,
but i never hurt you,
it was the other way around,,
so this song goes out to u and all the other bitches i had met,
(chorus 3x)
and it may seem bitter,
but now im so much better,
cuz i got feelings for someone else,
cuz she don't hurt me,
and she loves me,
so leave me the **** alone!!!
(Chorus 2x then fade)
Answers: Seems like not long ago,
that you said u were into me,
but i saw through ur lies and deceit,
cuz when u turned on me,
it became so clear you see,
that you were never deserving of me
Chorus: So here's to you ************,
you cheated on me you *****,
I thought u were my friend,
but this has gotta end,
cuz when you lied,
a part of me died inside,
so go away and i don't wanna see you no more
But then you said that you were having ur moment,
and now it's plain to see that ur alibis never cease to fool me,
cuz its been a long time since i ditched you,
but i never hurt you,
it was the other way around,,
so this song goes out to u and all the other bitches i had met,
(chorus 3x)
and it may seem bitter,
but now im so much better,
cuz i got feelings for someone else,
cuz she don't hurt me,
and she loves me,
so leave me the **** alone!!!
(Chorus 2x then fade)
Hott oops i mean sweet LOL!!!! JK But i do like it
First stanza you use the word "me" to many times...
Eh, other then that it seems like your average break up song. Seems a little amature, but maybe set to music it would sound different.
Just giving you my honest opinion.
i think it is awsome