Like my poem/song?!
Question: Loving can be so hard
Loving you is a pain
And i don't want to break your heart
But first you have to stop breaking mine.
Shattered and torn
Kiss my lips and tell me goodbye
Before the candel light goes out and you leave me to cry
The wax is melting
Into a pool of my blood
You tore from me
I slipped on my self
And fell into you
Answers: Loving can be so hard
Loving you is a pain
And i don't want to break your heart
But first you have to stop breaking mine.
Shattered and torn
Kiss my lips and tell me goodbye
Before the candel light goes out and you leave me to cry
The wax is melting
Into a pool of my blood
You tore from me
I slipped on my self
And fell into you
I know what you mean about not taking time to write poems. I'm the exact same way, I just write it all out on a whim and whatever comes out is the final result...
It's good, it's from the heart, and has emotion behind it, which is what makes it a good poem.
it sux
Interesting....used to reading poems about Ireland, but this is interesting.
yes! i like it,it's awesome (:
i think that it is good..u must have worked really hard on it and i understand it easy. hope this helps
Nice lyrics, I'd like to hear music put to this
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it needs a spell check but it is good but it is a little random like 1 verse doesn't fit with the next
over all it makes no sense, i guess it would be a good free form poem but not a song
I like your poem/song you should put it on one of those websites that you can post your poem..
The wax is melting
Into a pool of my blood ---- ridiculous... how you get this idea.
but if you made it uniquely or you didn't copy from others and that's your idea. Good job! but i don't like your poem.