Is this a good Rap???!
Question: Back in the back of a... Cadillac
Number one with a bullet
I'm a power pack.
Yes I'm...in a bang, with the gang
They gotta catch me if they want me to hang.
'Cause I'm back on the track
and I'm beatin' the flack,
Nobody's gonna get me on another rap.
So look at me now....
I'm just makin' my play
Don't try to push your luck
Just get outta my way.....Cause I'm back!
Answers: Back in the back of a... Cadillac
Number one with a bullet
I'm a power pack.
Yes I'm...in a bang, with the gang
They gotta catch me if they want me to hang.
'Cause I'm back on the track
and I'm beatin' the flack,
Nobody's gonna get me on another rap.
So look at me now....
I'm just makin' my play
Don't try to push your luck
Just get outta my way.....Cause I'm back!
I'm not sure, but if you're Back in Black when you hit the sack, I guess you should be catchin some flack,
cause your name is Mack, and thats a fact
and you're just a hack, cause you're back in black.
Good luck with it.
But I think the photo from 1984 is great, and you should get 10 bonus points for that.
Ummm,truthfully no.
but it rhymes:)
For the first time, its decent. Try using metaphors and multi rhymes. One more thing, some lines don't rhyme, not even a slant rhyme. Try to make all lines rhyme.
Not yet, but it has the potential to be... keep trying.
you moron biting ac/dc u think were that ****** stupid?
almost
no. and yes, it does rhyme.
Pretty decent for a beginner,
Wouldnt say its the BEST,
Dont forget to be a true rhymer,
Or you'll be fake like the REST.
Lol i would say decent. Just keep going and you'll get there.