Honest comments on these lyrics i wrote???!
Question: chorus
you're fading away,
and almost gone.
you're out on the fray,
but i'm still holding on
i can't see through my tears,
i can't hear through my fears.
because, you're still fading away,
and i'm still holding on.
Verse 1
the scenery changes to gray,
my thinking's foregone.
you're slipping away,
and without you i'm done.
(repeat chorus)
Verse 2
I can’t let you go,
Like the day can’t stop to rest.
I’ve lost all hope,
With my soul in such unrest.
(repeat chorus)
Verse 3
You must not have known,
How hard I’d take it,
Because the one I thought I knew,
Never would’ve done this.
(repeat chorus)
Bridge
You’re still fading away,
And I’m still holding on.
Fading, falling, slipping away.
Copyright 2008
Answers: chorus
you're fading away,
and almost gone.
you're out on the fray,
but i'm still holding on
i can't see through my tears,
i can't hear through my fears.
because, you're still fading away,
and i'm still holding on.
Verse 1
the scenery changes to gray,
my thinking's foregone.
you're slipping away,
and without you i'm done.
(repeat chorus)
Verse 2
I can’t let you go,
Like the day can’t stop to rest.
I’ve lost all hope,
With my soul in such unrest.
(repeat chorus)
Verse 3
You must not have known,
How hard I’d take it,
Because the one I thought I knew,
Never would’ve done this.
(repeat chorus)
Bridge
You’re still fading away,
And I’m still holding on.
Fading, falling, slipping away.
Copyright 2008
OMG YOU WROTE THAT??! ok i look up a lot of lyrics (to pretty much all of my 427 songs) and those sound like REAL lyrics to a REAL song. BRAVO!
Sounds like it would make an awesome song! (Rock maybe)
it's really good
meaningful lyrics
i really like it:)
i like!
very meaningful
sounds good keep it up
Ewwwww! It sounds like Michal Jackson wrote it!!! Ewwww!!
Lets just see if one word would show you how i like it.............................
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