Country fan opinion?!
Question: id like your opinion on the song i wrote:Roses
its gonna take a whole lot more this time,than a dozen roses and a bottle of wine.to undo the things youve done,there aint that many roses under the sun.you broke a heart when you walked out the door,and told me not to bother you any more,now after enough tears and some time, you come around like everything is fine.its gonna take a whole lot more this time,than a dozen roses and a bottle of wine.i cant belive youd do the things youve done,there aint that many roses uinder the sun.
Answers: id like your opinion on the song i wrote:Roses
its gonna take a whole lot more this time,than a dozen roses and a bottle of wine.to undo the things youve done,there aint that many roses under the sun.you broke a heart when you walked out the door,and told me not to bother you any more,now after enough tears and some time, you come around like everything is fine.its gonna take a whole lot more this time,than a dozen roses and a bottle of wine.i cant belive youd do the things youve done,there aint that many roses uinder the sun.
i like it and i want it to sing i wish i could write great lines like that :)
I like it.
It needs some minor tweaking to make it "flow" better (the meter gets a little hitchy in "told me not to bother you any more"...it's OK to make it "no more" and make it grammatically correct if it will "sing better") but there's a solid hook there. Come up with a couple decent verses and you may have something salable there, partner.
i actually like it, its pretty good!!!