What do you think of these rap lyrics i wrote?!
Question: I'm still not finished writing it. This is only the first verse.The song talks about you trying to get with a girl you know you can't get. And everybody's telling you to give up on her.But you don't wanna give up.....
Verse 1:
I'm done with all of the bull **** and all of the games.
I'm giving up my chance,aint that a shame
Cuz i was a believer and i tried to be strong
And everybody told me that i was so wrong
now i look back at times and i guess they were right
And now im going down with out putting up a fight
And it seems i dont know what to say anymore
I was so close and they just closed the door
I can't take anymore of this pain inside
This whole time it's been a rollercoaster ride
but i'm still aliv and i'm not dead
I should've never said the things that i said.......
Answers: I'm still not finished writing it. This is only the first verse.The song talks about you trying to get with a girl you know you can't get. And everybody's telling you to give up on her.But you don't wanna give up.....
Verse 1:
I'm done with all of the bull **** and all of the games.
I'm giving up my chance,aint that a shame
Cuz i was a believer and i tried to be strong
And everybody told me that i was so wrong
now i look back at times and i guess they were right
And now im going down with out putting up a fight
And it seems i dont know what to say anymore
I was so close and they just closed the door
I can't take anymore of this pain inside
This whole time it's been a rollercoaster ride
but i'm still aliv and i'm not dead
I should've never said the things that i said.......
That wuz....amazing. I love it!!!!! If you turn out to be a rapper, I'm your number one fan!!!!!!!!!!
i like it.
tight
thats really good that should make that a real song i would vote for it as my fav. lol
OH mm g that was so good i love it so wonderful good job
Great job!