What do you think of my verse?!
Question: possible hypnotical optical alignment
spit rhymes kick time back to the future
mcs brazen leave me in amazement
thinking they underground
when they couldnt scrape the pavement
i save this venom for mending the landscape
ending wack rap flows from the canidates
asimo 911 reasons to mediate
negotiate hate with a fist
never hesitate to dis
wack rap men tongue waggin like b*tches
back when i was digging underground like ditches
now i got my spine hard like arthritis in the winter
mcs left and right so i take the centre
exclaim inflict pain wiseguy killer
leavin mafiaso bleeding from the liver
my cat o nine tongue have you severed
heat waves penetrate words in my sentence
mention my name
i cause pain to your parents
wack rapper antidote i gots without a clearance
livin in this age of a ripped jean appearance
asimo 911 ways to make you fear this
captivating listeners like speeches by prisoners
blazin the green just to escape all the trivia
Answers: possible hypnotical optical alignment
spit rhymes kick time back to the future
mcs brazen leave me in amazement
thinking they underground
when they couldnt scrape the pavement
i save this venom for mending the landscape
ending wack rap flows from the canidates
asimo 911 reasons to mediate
negotiate hate with a fist
never hesitate to dis
wack rap men tongue waggin like b*tches
back when i was digging underground like ditches
now i got my spine hard like arthritis in the winter
mcs left and right so i take the centre
exclaim inflict pain wiseguy killer
leavin mafiaso bleeding from the liver
my cat o nine tongue have you severed
heat waves penetrate words in my sentence
mention my name
i cause pain to your parents
wack rapper antidote i gots without a clearance
livin in this age of a ripped jean appearance
asimo 911 ways to make you fear this
captivating listeners like speeches by prisoners
blazin the green just to escape all the trivia
It is dope... I never knew Asimo could spit!!!
For real... I see the GZA influence in there lol.... ("heat waves penetrate words in my sentence")
quite complex rhyme style, i think you been doing this for a while now.but i like it. its very good.
better than a lot i seen on here.
wow dawg, your raps is all class. Not a beginner rap i see.
I like your imagery and rhyme scheme.
Reminds me a little of Atmosphere.
you nice son.
----------chek me ------
joe p never skips
switched from mixtape
to a compact disc
step into the mind of this rebel soul child
head hung low- ape, sky bound and neva follows
dont pay attention to the robots Im lightyears past tha line
try to define, put the alien in a box,and trap emm im time??
see dead corpses watching me everywhere around
everyone around, just holdin on, think they holdin down
its paranoia, samurai sword ya, slides out, look in my eyes
symbolize the real defintion of pain, hittin stride right now
cage fly open and it switch into rage,
throwin you up into the ga--me right now
now, double meaning, switch up the pa--ce
infiltratin consentration only fear incarceration
my pipe dreams stay chasin a lyrical penetration
now i got ya
screw facin,hands shakin,pupils gazin,mind racin elevation
with an equal culmination to relax the acceleration
go back to sleep, to avoid the devastatin track gracin
think you can see me? quick lacem gouge out ya eyes
then i cut out ya tounge, try to talk now, feel your whole bodies numb
clap my hands twice, fingers and thumbs, reveal the true meaning of life
woke up and blew breath back inta ya lungs
You have some nice lyrics, very complex and better than a lot of people but I can see you are getting off topic to much.. Thats okay if that is a freestyle but if its an actual song I woulden't go to crazy on doing stuff like that.
good...kinda old school....i like it
its cooooool u sure its urs. it sound pro