What dyou think of my rap?!
Question: i'll be smokin dope till im old as hell
coz my lifes messed up an im broke aswell
go to jail? i might aswell jus stay at home and blow a male!
thats a joke by the way - i aint even close to gay
but if times get hard ill take off my clothes for pay
like that joker game - gettin pounded by dre knowing he wont complain, i pretend that im normal but im so insane - wheres the shotty at? i wanna do a kurt cobain
thats a little taste
Honest opinions only please
Answers: i'll be smokin dope till im old as hell
coz my lifes messed up an im broke aswell
go to jail? i might aswell jus stay at home and blow a male!
thats a joke by the way - i aint even close to gay
but if times get hard ill take off my clothes for pay
like that joker game - gettin pounded by dre knowing he wont complain, i pretend that im normal but im so insane - wheres the shotty at? i wanna do a kurt cobain
thats a little taste
Honest opinions only please
actually you are very talented, a bit funny wit a taste of anger but its nice!
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Sounded like you tried to be funny in a sophomoric way--kinda like a Slim Shady type of thing. It didn't really work.
well let me think, it's acutally really talented with the lyrics but u need to add a little more cuss words in there once in a awhile but for the most of it, it's acutally not bad but it's almost like slim shady thing
NOT BAD continue 2 do what u feel
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preatty good r u goth do u sound kinda like u hate yo self