Do you like my rap?!
Question: freddy biscuits
quick to get hit in an instant
bitchcuts talking like an infant
i sink em
swiftly slayed by tongues of the typsy
asimo strike you out at a quick speed
smoke weed and still spit sh*t that you cant do
ya biscuit get eaten by a bunch of homo dudes
you wack fool i anhilate your mindstate easily
while you stand dribbling
like a basketball special team
you commercial fiend addicted to spotlight
while asimo represent darkness like midnight
your insight is not there
my lyrics tie you to your armchair
i was killing dudes when you was sleeping with your teddy bear
stab you with sharp pens
smash your face with my writin'
bury you in dark streets leave you in silence
your off point while asimo cook beef like a steak joint
your words degrade while mine annoint
freddy borderline gay with a wack name
ill break your fragile mind like a window pane.
Answers: freddy biscuits
quick to get hit in an instant
bitchcuts talking like an infant
i sink em
swiftly slayed by tongues of the typsy
asimo strike you out at a quick speed
smoke weed and still spit sh*t that you cant do
ya biscuit get eaten by a bunch of homo dudes
you wack fool i anhilate your mindstate easily
while you stand dribbling
like a basketball special team
you commercial fiend addicted to spotlight
while asimo represent darkness like midnight
your insight is not there
my lyrics tie you to your armchair
i was killing dudes when you was sleeping with your teddy bear
stab you with sharp pens
smash your face with my writin'
bury you in dark streets leave you in silence
your off point while asimo cook beef like a steak joint
your words degrade while mine annoint
freddy borderline gay with a wack name
ill break your fragile mind like a window pane.
uh oh, looks like Ether just got beat haha
but seriously yeah pretty good, some nice disses and solid rhymes
didnt u say it was about freddy biscuts?
"smoke weed and still spit sh*t that you cant do"
i though u sed u didnt do drugs earlier?
To Tiny:
Dont even try n mess wit my man Asimo
the slugs ull be flyen when them gats ull go
u tryen to diss, but i just laugh u hoe
n what chu know about brother ali
hes a white rapper who smuther the beat
lame gay f*ggot, u aint nothen ta me
I been on the block, huggen the street
u aint hearin me, im straight up busten the heat
and yo listen up lyrically, i'm a counsin ta G (kool G rap)
you aint dissen cuz, N*gga u rappen slow like u retarded
your whole style is so garbage
how u gonna say u big with a name like tiny?
n i bet the girl u laid is justa dirty b*tch
matta fact, i take that back
cuz "she" prolly had a d*ck
To Underground:
Underground, u got a nothing sound
aint Krs-one but i'll hit u with 100 rounds
from 100 guns and 2 hundred clips
aint wu tang, but i aint nothen ta f*ck wit
and u tryen ta rap?
Whats up with those elementary rhymes?
keep f*cken wit us, n im gonna be a felony times,
like at leats 5, from letten the shots rip from my glock 9
son, you aint got rhymes
sh*t, sit, hit, rain and game
ne 1 can come up with that school boy sh*t
Think u got skills? fool ur sick
and i dont mean dope
i mean nasty
like snorten un-clean coke
i bet ur a dumb feind yo
smoken rock from a can
u suck at rap, so stop the jam
Yeaa i think u got talent:) keeep it up and u never know what can happen in some years
honestly, it was kinda weak...might be more interesting to someone who knew who you dissing
ak13 dont know what hes TALKIN about.
that was some sick nasty flow, y'know.
keep it up.
the question of whether ya raps is really fly,
silly guy, stop rappin if ya really white..
you see most of these rap cats is black cats who got bad acts,
you don't really roll with Cad-lacs, with killas that will stab cats,
i know a bunch of motherfuckers that really can outdo you,
gansters selling coke that push so hard they plow right through you,
but you, you wouldn't know much since rappin's all ya know cuz,
don't go rap you should go pop, ya rap sounds like a soap op,
i'm FRESH out of the soap box, them boys they fall, I don't stop,
i'm no PAC, but I'm soo Big, the girls I layed, they know this,
i flow with all the dope kids who sell zones from their own cribs,
what you think about my raps... hahahha.
u got skill i would know the song better if u told us the tune/beat of the rap
Wow...hard. That's real, you got a lot of talent. Write a hook, get a beat, and take it to a cheap studio. That's how The Game got all the beef off his chest.
I wasn't a fan of those lyrics...
Fred Durst?
naw, i'm not feeling it. try something like;
The past ain't nothing to me
See i'm free
Living in the land of dee mocrasy
Hip-ocrosiy
Making a mokery of peeps from the street like you and me be.
Hip-Hop High School, by Alan Sitomer.
asimo im here, this is aftermath
sit your *** down, come see me after class
think before you speak i be rippin mc's
ignorant freak
sick from my rhymes that you eat
asimo i've come to start beheadin
spittin **** only cause the chance to click edit
you cocky little ****
next time you better look before you sit
when i take aim you know its gonna hit
im always here.ready. to spit acid rain
get hopes up i'm there to end you little game
That sh!t was dope keep it up....oh yea k no idea who it's about
sounds good