My Lyrics/poem whatever you want to call it?!
Question: I see you from afar
but I know it will never work
we tried our love before
but you broke my heart
friends before and friends we will always be
but I still love you
and I wish you still loved me
i miss your touch
your comforting voice
you always had a way of calming down
when my world fliped upside down
I know I can go to you for anything
but it just isn the same
I would trust you with my life
And I want you to know I would do the same
I know you love me as a friend
and I thank god for that
I just dont want to lose you
because you are a great friend
So what do you think of my lyrics?
Answers: I see you from afar
but I know it will never work
we tried our love before
but you broke my heart
friends before and friends we will always be
but I still love you
and I wish you still loved me
i miss your touch
your comforting voice
you always had a way of calming down
when my world fliped upside down
I know I can go to you for anything
but it just isn the same
I would trust you with my life
And I want you to know I would do the same
I know you love me as a friend
and I thank god for that
I just dont want to lose you
because you are a great friend
So what do you think of my lyrics?
ok dont listen to the other douch bags, i liked it, not all poetry/songs have to rhyme or fall together perfectly, i liked the concept of it and its actually quite beautiful if you can take the time to stop and actually READ it....thats just wat i think
You really don't want to know.
amateurish.
keep practicing.
your lines dont fall together well.
sorry.