What do you think of these lyrics for a song i have wrote?!
Question: The flames begin
Riding through the darkness like never before
Looking for the eye of the storm
And the world goes into the darkness lying deep below
Pain and misery changing tonight
Continuing to fight the eternal fight
And the world spins in to chaos for all to know
Clashing steel and burning glory
Waiting for the holy story
Taking curses blood and pain
For all we slain
Day turns into night right before our eyes
The war of terror before the sunrise
Cry out for the burning heroes
And the lives we knew are gone
And the flames of life go on
choras
Call out for hidden powers
Now in the death that we stand
With the power in our hands
In unity we stand
in the worlds within
The destiny is ours
Pain and misery takes our nature within
And with that the fire begins
(mini solo)
Fighting for the life of those we adore
Offering our hearts like never before
And the flames rise in our hearts burning ever more
Taking our pain trouble and slain
Knowing we’ll rise once again
And the fury builds up in our minds opening the door
Fury build anger rise
Though the dark disguise
Knowing that’s once and for all
Now’s the time to fall
But still the guns blaze in revelation
To the power of our nation
holy night demons night
winning the the eternal fight
and fight still with might
Cry out for the burning heroes
And the lives we knew are gone
And the flames of life go on
(long solo)
Cry out for the burning heroes
And the lives we knew are gone
And the flames of life go on
Call out for hidden powers
Now in the death that we stand
With the power in our hands
In unity we stand in the worlds within
The destiny is ours to last
Pain and misery takes our nature within
And with that the fire begins
(ending solo)
Answers: The flames begin
Riding through the darkness like never before
Looking for the eye of the storm
And the world goes into the darkness lying deep below
Pain and misery changing tonight
Continuing to fight the eternal fight
And the world spins in to chaos for all to know
Clashing steel and burning glory
Waiting for the holy story
Taking curses blood and pain
For all we slain
Day turns into night right before our eyes
The war of terror before the sunrise
Cry out for the burning heroes
And the lives we knew are gone
And the flames of life go on
choras
Call out for hidden powers
Now in the death that we stand
With the power in our hands
In unity we stand
in the worlds within
The destiny is ours
Pain and misery takes our nature within
And with that the fire begins
(mini solo)
Fighting for the life of those we adore
Offering our hearts like never before
And the flames rise in our hearts burning ever more
Taking our pain trouble and slain
Knowing we’ll rise once again
And the fury builds up in our minds opening the door
Fury build anger rise
Though the dark disguise
Knowing that’s once and for all
Now’s the time to fall
But still the guns blaze in revelation
To the power of our nation
holy night demons night
winning the the eternal fight
and fight still with might
Cry out for the burning heroes
And the lives we knew are gone
And the flames of life go on
(long solo)
Cry out for the burning heroes
And the lives we knew are gone
And the flames of life go on
Call out for hidden powers
Now in the death that we stand
With the power in our hands
In unity we stand in the worlds within
The destiny is ours to last
Pain and misery takes our nature within
And with that the fire begins
(ending solo)
I like the lyrics, but it depends on what kind of music you are setting it to. For example, my personal opinion is that it would be a great heavy metal song (similar to Hammerfall or Dragonforce), but you didn't specify what type of music you were planning on using it as.
i think it is great song and i like a lot
i like it, it is a little ummm dark but if that is who you are I have no problem with it. As long as you don't scare people it is good! :)
its prob real gd sung, but when u read it lyk tht it sounds rele depressin.
sorry !! mainly the 1st part the rest is gd
enjoyed. try to scratch the guitar sounds a little when you play to make it even more rockerish