Trying to write a rap song, what do you think of these lyrics?!
Question: My game is hot as laser beams, tight as wrangler jeans
after that green like a chase scene on the A Team.
krispy kreme.................... aint the breakfast of champs
eat my wheaties hustle like a rookie in training camp
got that green in the magazines ballin like the dream team
steam flyin out the haters ears when i hit the scene
walkin out the party everybody thinks im leavin'
but the partys just startin' its time to do some chiefin'
thats all i got so far. do you think it is any good?
Answers: My game is hot as laser beams, tight as wrangler jeans
after that green like a chase scene on the A Team.
krispy kreme.................... aint the breakfast of champs
eat my wheaties hustle like a rookie in training camp
got that green in the magazines ballin like the dream team
steam flyin out the haters ears when i hit the scene
walkin out the party everybody thinks im leavin'
but the partys just startin' its time to do some chiefin'
thats all i got so far. do you think it is any good?
Yeah i actually like it too.. start trying to say stuff thats more real though and not just making up lyrics because they rhyme. like krispy kreme.....aint the breakfast of champs? what does that have to do with anything? lol but the party part is tight
alright so far. well, depends on the tempo and measurements. but the rhyme and sense are pretty alright.
this is hot but it needs some tweecking