Wrote a song in chemistry today... i thought it was okay just wanted other peopl!
Question: So i got bored in chemistry and i started writing a song... i think its okay... its one of my first songs... i only wrote the first verse so far... any suggestions would be great
Do remember the first night i saw you
You were in that pretty red dress
I went over to say Hi and you gave me smile
and when i asked you out you said yes
Do you remeber our very first date
It was at the movie theater one night
when we got to you house i gave you your first kiss
then you smiled under the moon light
do you remember our very first fight
it was the worst night of my life
i thought it was over but then i realized i loved you
and that cant be stoped by a little strife
PLEASE BE HONEST
Answers: So i got bored in chemistry and i started writing a song... i think its okay... its one of my first songs... i only wrote the first verse so far... any suggestions would be great
Do remember the first night i saw you
You were in that pretty red dress
I went over to say Hi and you gave me smile
and when i asked you out you said yes
Do you remeber our very first date
It was at the movie theater one night
when we got to you house i gave you your first kiss
then you smiled under the moon light
do you remember our very first fight
it was the worst night of my life
i thought it was over but then i realized i loved you
and that cant be stoped by a little strife
PLEASE BE HONEST
hey that's a pretty good song. I like how everything rhymes. it seems like some good emotion as well. you should keep writing more!
cool. thats pretty good. i suggest you keep writing :]]
So you wrote a song. Pretty good lyrics. But where's the music?
Alberich
You need a fourth verse that is upbeat.
i like it keep it coming.
I now LOVE YOU for writing that song. I ah-dore it!! Please, e-mail me.