I wrote a song! Please let me know what you think?!
Question: "Do You Know?"
Verse 1
You are my one desire,
It is only you I admire.
You give my life new purpose,
just being around you, I feel weightless.
I'd go anywhere with you,
Do you know that that is true?
Verse 2
You hold me and I close my eyes,
let the moment sink in.
When I'm with you,
I never have to pretend.
I can't live without your touch,
Do you know that much?
Chorus
Do you know how you make me
feel when you look into my eyes?
Do you know that, before now,
I've never felt so alive?
Do you know that my heart,
will never let you go?
Do you know?
Answers: "Do You Know?"
Verse 1
You are my one desire,
It is only you I admire.
You give my life new purpose,
just being around you, I feel weightless.
I'd go anywhere with you,
Do you know that that is true?
Verse 2
You hold me and I close my eyes,
let the moment sink in.
When I'm with you,
I never have to pretend.
I can't live without your touch,
Do you know that much?
Chorus
Do you know how you make me
feel when you look into my eyes?
Do you know that, before now,
I've never felt so alive?
Do you know that my heart,
will never let you go?
Do you know?
Nicee song! Remember to copyright it because someone can steal it so be careful! I love it! Nice work!
i LOVE it
the line "do you know that much" seems a little condescending for the song. maybe reword it?
i wouldn't post my songs on here...
people might steal'em
tbh - it good but its all a bit bryan adams apart from verse 2 (good lyrics!)
put the rhyming dictionary away.
sorry but you did ask...........
Umm kind of mimics Byran Adams a little bit to me, but other than that it's good to start with.
its a really good song i like it :)
Are you talking about God? Because that is what it sounds like. I do like it a lot, though.