More late night lyrics... Some advice please?!
Question: Hum. I have been writing too many lyrics lately! Maybe I have just been staying up too late.
I was hoping to get these edited up relatively quickly, so any advice you have is fantastic. I really just want to make them better, because I feel like there is something there, I just don't know what to do with it. :)
Orange Dreams
Sunshine
100 miles and I’m
Just fine
With staying here it’s
Alright
If this is all we have
Then this is all we have
Don’t tell me.
Don’t tell me.
Orange dreams
Caught my head in the color
If I stay here a while, will you catch another
Train, you’re always tied down
I just want to be free
Ocean air
Is my cue card for
Bright Eyes
If you want another drink,
I’ll be my whole life.
If this is all we have
Then this is all we have.
Don’t Tell me.
Don’t tell me.
Orange dreams
Caught my head in the color
I want to stay a while, could you just catch another?
You’re always tied down,
And I just want to fly.
You thought it was better
I stay quiet and sober
But I’m not your dog,
And no I won’t rollover.
So it’s not alright,
I’d feel better if you left.
Honestly, you’re just wasting my breath.
Orange dreams
I caught my head in the color.
I’ll stay here a while,
I’ll stay here a while,
And just fly.
Answers: Hum. I have been writing too many lyrics lately! Maybe I have just been staying up too late.
I was hoping to get these edited up relatively quickly, so any advice you have is fantastic. I really just want to make them better, because I feel like there is something there, I just don't know what to do with it. :)
Orange Dreams
Sunshine
100 miles and I’m
Just fine
With staying here it’s
Alright
If this is all we have
Then this is all we have
Don’t tell me.
Don’t tell me.
Orange dreams
Caught my head in the color
If I stay here a while, will you catch another
Train, you’re always tied down
I just want to be free
Ocean air
Is my cue card for
Bright Eyes
If you want another drink,
I’ll be my whole life.
If this is all we have
Then this is all we have.
Don’t Tell me.
Don’t tell me.
Orange dreams
Caught my head in the color
I want to stay a while, could you just catch another?
You’re always tied down,
And I just want to fly.
You thought it was better
I stay quiet and sober
But I’m not your dog,
And no I won’t rollover.
So it’s not alright,
I’d feel better if you left.
Honestly, you’re just wasting my breath.
Orange dreams
I caught my head in the color.
I’ll stay here a while,
I’ll stay here a while,
And just fly.
mm i really dont get it, i just dont get what its about