Is this a good song? i wrote it.?!
Question: I'm thinking tonight that there is someone
just going to be one. Theres always many ways
To get up and say hay!
chorus
And say.....
This is a song and i know I'm not wrong
I alive no one can take the pride.
So i guess this is going.......to come to an end
i went back out yander to see what i might wonder.
Because theres many ways to say hay....
Just get up and pray to God.....
what did they treat you
like one day i might be outback with my dog playing some b-ball
chorus
Do people like you for who you are
or do you have to own a car.
I didn't know if i was able to say or able to pray.............
chorus
*whisper*
just go. i don't want you here just leave me aloneee.........
*whisper chorus*
Answers: I'm thinking tonight that there is someone
just going to be one. Theres always many ways
To get up and say hay!
chorus
And say.....
This is a song and i know I'm not wrong
I alive no one can take the pride.
So i guess this is going.......to come to an end
i went back out yander to see what i might wonder.
Because theres many ways to say hay....
Just get up and pray to God.....
what did they treat you
like one day i might be outback with my dog playing some b-ball
chorus
Do people like you for who you are
or do you have to own a car.
I didn't know if i was able to say or able to pray.............
chorus
*whisper*
just go. i don't want you here just leave me aloneee.........
*whisper chorus*
Too much Rhyme. Words in a song have to just fit and be close to rhyming. Listen to the Beatles.