Will you please comment on my vocals and the song?!
Question: Red Sky
The red sky at night is the darkest delight
The red sky at morn as the dark as gone
And
I can’t reach the light – I can’t find the fire
I can’t touch the sun, or run from another
So may be we should take a break
So we don’t make anymore mistakes…..today
If tomorrow never comes,
And yesterday is only a day away,
We have to change to stay the same,
When we only have today
The thoughts of another don’t involve any one but them
Home truths don’t matter when you’ve lied to yourself …again
And
I can’t shut them up – I can’t make them quiet
I can‘t wake up from this self-contained riot
So maybe we should stay awake
Just to find out just what it takes
Does my vocal style remind you of anyone? (be honest)
Do you like the song?
All criticism builds a stronger result! If you can please listen to my other songs on this site (comments welcome)
http://www.garageband.com/song?|pe1|S8LT...
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You can score on 1 - 10 (1=rubbish, 10=excellen
Answers: Red Sky
The red sky at night is the darkest delight
The red sky at morn as the dark as gone
And
I can’t reach the light – I can’t find the fire
I can’t touch the sun, or run from another
So may be we should take a break
So we don’t make anymore mistakes…..today
If tomorrow never comes,
And yesterday is only a day away,
We have to change to stay the same,
When we only have today
The thoughts of another don’t involve any one but them
Home truths don’t matter when you’ve lied to yourself …again
And
I can’t shut them up – I can’t make them quiet
I can‘t wake up from this self-contained riot
So maybe we should stay awake
Just to find out just what it takes
Does my vocal style remind you of anyone? (be honest)
Do you like the song?
All criticism builds a stronger result! If you can please listen to my other songs on this site (comments welcome)
http://www.garageband.com/song?|pe1|S8LT...
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You can score on 1 - 10 (1=rubbish, 10=excellen
I thought that you do have a good voice just tune it up a little bit...you made the song your own and I thought the song was okay..didn't LOVE it but didn't HATE it..so overall I will give you a...
5 on the beat
6 on your voice
6 on lyrics
Hope that helps...and you sort of remind me of someone but the name escapes me : )
10 ......Loved it!
I went to the site and it wont let me listen to anything. . . .Sorry